Beautiful! Loved the unexpected reintegration of Sev's soul, and especially that final line of the chapter.
I'm no good at guessing things like what Sev might have used to make his Horcrux, so I won't even try. But I would love to not be left in the dark, if possible. Even if you left it ambiguous in the fic, maybe tell us what you were thinking in an AN or something??
Looking forward to the epilogue, though sad the fic is coming to an end. This was an enjoyable one! Working on anything new??
These two are just bloody adorable at the end - I had the stupidest grin on my face. I can't decide what the Horcrux was in but I had guessed that there was something inside the snitch. I'll have to have a proper think in the morning.
Can't wait for the epilogue. I love a good epilogue.
Perhaps Dumbles was right - Love is Harry's hidden power AND magic is all about 'intent', as it seems when Harry reaffirmed his love for Severus and desire to see him whole Magic 'fixed' it all for him.
Yes! Great chapter! There was so much I loved in this. I really like the interpretation of Albus as Death when Harry is talking to him at King's Cross. I've always interpreted it like Albus is a part of Harry's own psyche, but I like this better.
Also, great choice having Tonks and Greyback get together. It was an unexpected twist but it made so much sense. And it explains Tonks' feelings for Lupin even though he turned out to be such a dick.
And, of course your punishment of Dung was all I could have hoped for. Very karmic indeed.
I know the fates of Sev and the pup are still up in the air, to some degree, but I've got my fingers crossed. Can't wait to find out!
Oh, and I forgot to add that I liked how un-epic Voldie's death is. It's the exact death he deserves, more like an afterthought than the center of attention. A really interesting choice.
Ok, now I'm done.
Where to start... abehnvicmobefwcuvnxhvugcyrtxaewzhiujohujnbhgvcfdxszgby!!!!!
It was just.... hnjkghvbynuim perfect!
Loved Death - that's a weird thing to type
Killing Moldy being an after thought was the death he deserved Oh and Tonks and Fen makes so much sense in this story.
I am however worried about what is still to come - Sev and the pup being fine and them living happily ever after seems too easy
Be kind to us please
Really enjoyed Harry's discussion with death - very insightful of him to leave the stone there so he would not remain immortal.
Loved him telling Tom to piss off cos he was busy - big smiles when I read that.
What do I need .... hmmm
Severus to wake up and be okay.
The battle to stop when they see Voldie is dead.
Harry's pup to be okay.
Wizarding world to accept Harry as a werewolf (this would be nice - but I can see it not happening and Harry telling them all to f-off, then leaving with Severus)
Bring on the next update
Oh you great meany - I just hate cliff hangers.
Severus needs to survive and Harry needs to lose the horcrux but keep his baby and come back to Severus.
please, please, please
What a bittersweet moment between Harry and Sev. Beautifully done.
I was wondering when sectumsempra was going to come back into play... although I don't remember everything from that moment in Changes so it's hard to guess how it will play out. At this point I'm just along for the ride :)
Your preview has me nervous, but one thing I know is that Harry is strong enough to not give in to Lupin again, so I'm having faith that he will find a way to return and kick Voldie's moldy butt.
Hope you update soon!
Awww, they're so cute! I <3 sweet!Severus.