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for Narcissa Militant

by Lomonaaeren

schedule July 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Loved the diary becoming ice cream. And - oh my poor eyes - picturing Lockhart's underpants... BLEARGH! Appropriately nasty. And yay for Narcissa scaring the shit out of Ron and the other Gryffindors. Such fun! SP

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schedule July 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

about #2..

Maleficient....Narcissa reminds me of a wicked version of Maleficient. O_O

schedule July 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wonderful chapter!!! Now I'm wondering what has  Narcissa in mind for Lockhart!! Can't wait to read more!!!

schedule July 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Man this is the most fascinating story. I actually can't wait until the boys are older.. Go Narcissa Go!

schedule July 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm loving this Narcissa (and this Lucius). Can't wait to read more (and see Lockhart get what he deserves - stupid git!). Loving that you're taking the canon events and twisting them to give a new narrative. SP

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schedule July 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

WELL...that was different. O_O

schedule June 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Loving it! Can't wait for more!

schedule June 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great chapter!!  And definitely I like the plot!  It's nice to read more about this ruthless version of Narcissa instead the perfect pureblood  wife!  Can't wait to read next chapter!!