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for Narcissa Militant

by Lomonaaeren

schedule October 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

absolutely "wonderful and terrifying", loving this story!

person SParker
schedule September 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

about  #12?...

I thought you were going to do another story, not chapter.

schedule September 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch12 - I loved Narcissa's internal dialogue when Draco went to her about the newspaper. Her worries that he is becoming like Lucius were perfect; as was her wondering how Lucius had survived before she came into his life.

With Narcissa on the case, Harry's horcrux is as good as gone! SP

person staar
schedule September 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Well that was awesome, that Narissa got them out of there, now don't hurt her.....Snape what side is he on ????? I can see that she will have alot of killing to do, hope her stupid husband is in there too.!!!!!!!!you can see that i don't like Lucius very much !!!! thansk for the update :):):)

schedule September 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Awww, poor Harry. And yay for Narcissa saving Snape from spying. Enjoyed Nagini becoming a book. Love this series. SP

schedule September 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

CH10 - Oh crapola. I'm not sure who I'm most worried for: Harry or Voldie. I think Narcissa might kick his (V's) pasty white ass. And, ah, poor Draco. Silly boy, not asking, but still, he got snogged in the end. SP

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schedule September 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

wow just read it all and it had to stop there !!!!!!!!!!!! going to go nuts til your next update , to see if she gets there in time to help Harry !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

schedule September 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I love this Narcissa! She's brilliant! Please finish the rest, I'm hooked! Although I'm feeling sorry for Snape he really did need a telling off. 

schedule August 31, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch9 - Oh, clever CLEVER Narcissa! Will there be a replacement first task now or will they go straight onto the second? SP

schedule August 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch8 - Oh I nearly missed that line, but lol - a teacher with chicken feathers fetish! Poor Harry, feeling all alone and unloved (by Draco). But yay, as always, for Narcissa. SP