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by RedDawn

schedule July 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh, I am with you; no worries there. :-) I am enjoying this story and looking forward to more of it. I am sorry Ron had to be an ass, but I hope he will grow up through the story. Sigh... I am glad Draco was open to allowing her in and then opened up to her. I also look forward to her learning to trust him, as he proves himself. I hope Harry and Ginny are more mature and turn out to be better friends to her soon. Thank you! HG4eva

person MotekElm
schedule June 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I like it so far. a good start

person Alice
schedule June 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I haven't read any new ff in aaaaages and this one is so good!!! I'm loving it so far, only concrit is that the chapters are pretty short...or maybe this is average length now... either way it's amazing, keep writing!!

Also I feel so sorry for Draco, poor guy :/ can't wait for the story to pick up a bit more!!!

schedule June 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

That was a great way to break the ice between them. I love that he has his own apartment now, thanks to the jerks who tried to run him off. I know he doesn't want to run to Minerva, but I hope someone catches the bullies and punishes them soon. Draco won't be able to keep turning the other cheek and deep breathing. Hmmm Maybe Hermione can be his champion... :-)

Thanks! HG4eva

schedule June 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

First thanks for the new chapter already :) second im glad you changed the writing style because I read on my phone and the other way was sooo tiny :) great chapter can't wait to see what's next!!!

schedule June 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Really good start to what looks like it's going to be a great story.  Looking forward to reading future chapters.  Well done xxx

schedule June 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Poor Draco, can't he ever have peace?  

schedule June 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

What a good beginning! I am alrady feeling sorry for him and wondering what's up with her. I like that you've humbled him, even though he may seem impotent at the moment. I look forward to his growth, which will allow him to fight back in a more productive way. I also look forward to the professor's take on their indivudual work. lol Thank you! HG4eva

schedule June 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Big Dramione fan. Poor Ron!  He rarely ends up with Hermione in these fanfics. 

I like reading what people smell when they sniff Amortentia. 

Will definitely kee reading. 

Cheers!

schedule June 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I like it so far!! Love the sorting hats song :)