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for A Tender Moment

by NLAP

person Persy
schedule September 18, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Had it ALL!!!! Drama, smut, love, romance. EXCELLENT!!!

person Peahen
schedule June 25, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Beautiful AND hot!   I loved it.   Ty

person Peahen
schedule June 25, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Beautiful AND hot!   I loved it.   Ty

person Peahen
schedule June 25, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Beautiful AND hot!   I loved it.   Ty

schedule September 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Good ideas, good plot. Your English is understandable, you just need a Beta reader to give a clean up with tenses and some words. Good job

person SL
schedule July 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Thanks for the story!  I find it sweet. Also, the feeling-duplicating potion was quite an interesting, magical invention!

person SL
schedule July 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Keep it up! I wonder how tge story would move forward in post-war environment.

person Petite Mule
schedule July 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Thank you for update. Can't wait to read more

 

person Anonymous
schedule July 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Love this story! Please update again as soon as possible!! 

person Petite Mule
schedule June 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I love it! Dark fantaisy and all. I hope you will write more of it. Thank you.