My phone didn't want to log in to my AFF acc when I had the luck to have net access, so now you are getting my "10 cent's" instead just 5 ;)
Hey folks, just letting you know that I’ve taken a prompt in the SS/HG smutfest so things might be a little delayed as I try to get that done also - just let us know if that story will be available for reading also ;D
there’s still plenty he can do ;) - I know, but still...no :D
well, you’ll find him skulking around in the dungeons . . . with a bottle of wine ;) - the one-way ticket to the dungeons, please :D
I hope sleep has been kinder to you. RL has been kinder to me. Thanks for asking. - I'm glad to hear that things in your life are heading for the better :* My life is still hectic as ever, I spent 10 days on the road, living out of the suitcase, each day another city and different hotel, work all day and passing out of exhaustion every night. And I discovered how dangerous can be reading your and OO stories in the intercity bus while colleague (I don't know well at all) sitting next to you XD. Well, enough about me, here we go :)
Chapter 9:
It is interesting, you dabble with well known and yet often ignored or forgotten theory that sex can be fantastic stress releaver. Also, less explored but not neglected completely is the theory that what is called "sexual deviation" in scientific circles can be quite liberating and therapeutic (not that I'd recommend it as therapy on regular basis, it does demand certain mind set).
The more she heals, the more she returns to her old mindset, the rescuer of the lost causes. Funny thing is, the better she is, he is the one that is off balance.
I love the insight into his library, or better yet into his mind and psyche. It also reveals that he has a tendency to "live" through the books, more than by experiencing life and that is just sad.
he was both unpredictable and explosive, like a damaged but deadly wild animal - perfect combination, injured animals usually are dangerous if they are not used to trust people :)
And the consequences? Well, she wasn’t quite prepared to consider those . . . not yet. - she may not be, but I'm dying to read about them :D
A lone figure stood atop the astronomy tower, black robes lifting on the gentle breeze. - such a great metaphor to summarise his life...alone, distant, secluded, detached from people and feelings alike to avoid getting hurt.
She is playing dangerous game :)
Chapter 10:
Have you any idea how hard it was to read this chapter, in a bus full of passengers, sitting next to a colleague who is reading a serious scientific article, and trying not to grin like a mad woman?
I do love your dancing scenes after all "Tango" get me hooked to your stories in the first place.
after all, he had very little choice - talking about juggling the phials with nitroglycerine :D
He was good—far more adept than she had expected. - I just love this, being socially detached it doesn't necessarily mean inept
slip her hand down to grasp his crotch, stroking it gently before unfurling from him/she took a half step toward him again, swivelling her hips beneath her voluminous robe and rubbing gratuitously against his groin before stepping back/the top of her buttocks grinding against what she could swear was a hint of swelling bulge - huh, I love this form of seduction (even if it's just teasing)
considerable and surprisingly robust erection - thank you <3
and flung her away one last time. And on this occasion he didn’t hold on - it was bloody hard not to start laughing at this point :D
she could actually feel his seething gaze boring into her, into both of them. - she is an adrenaline junkie and she's going to pay for it :D
for his sake - his or hers?
Snape again was enough to have her insides roiling with anticipation. Would it happen? Would he let her? Or was that now off the table . . . forever? - I wonder...he does have intimacy issues...
“If you manage to make it out of here alive, that is.”/“Relationships often are.” - you just have to love Luna :D
But when she looked back she saw that Snape was already on the move. - and ofc we are heading to a cliffy :D
All she saw were his eyes . . . and the murderous fury within them. - fury or passion, one can easily mistake one for the other :D
With a terrified gasp, she turned. And ran. - hun, can you please toss me the rope? I'm dangling over that cliff you placed by the tips of my fingers ;)
Oh, well...until the next chapter, which seems further than ever before. At least give us that other story before I gnaw all my fingers to the chuckles :)
Take care and don't overwork yourself :*
Love&Hugs&Kissess xx
What can I say, this only made me anticipate the next chapter even more!!
I love that Hermione chose Snape for the dance, not Harry as the reader initially anticipated. It just shows what a girl boss Hermione is becoming, leaving the lost girl behind. And what a cheeky minx this Hermione is too, I completely admire all the subtle ways she was disarming Snape.
i can't wait for the next chapter and to see what Snape is going to do. The ending to this one, whilst leaving the reader wanting more, left me with a giant smirk. Just imaginings that although she may have a smirk on her face, girl knows she's going to get it, her shoes are off, she's running!! Haha!
Oh. My. Goodness. Bahahaha! My heart was pounding as we neared the end and then it was over, and I swear I'm running through the halls with her, frantically. No one wants to see murderous fury in Snape's eyes. Holy fuck! Please, please. Don't make us wait too long. What a cliffie! 8-O
*Hides face in hands* Ye, Gods, Hermione, what WERE you thinking?! Yeah, Snape will respond REALLY well to being forced into the limelight and groped in public. Bloody moron! (grumbles somemore about stupid Gryffindors). SP
Nooo, you're too good at these cliff hangers, I'm shouting at my laptop like someone demented. Loving, loving, loving this story. Can't wait for the next chapter xx
Mmmmm! Such an action-packed chapter with surprisingly little action--just a nice dance. You are the master of suspense.
I did not foresee the mid-dance tumescence test coming. That was brilliant :) (And an assessment I'll have to make use of in the future.)
inimitable--Tasty addition for my word notebook.
Snape wasn’t impotent. Far from it.--Bahahaha! Crisis averted.
I’m looking forward to hearing the story behind this,” Luna murmured in her ear as she placed her hand on Hermione’s shoulder. “If you manage to make it out of here alive, that is.”--Oh, good! Luna's joined the party :) And she's as wonderfully blithe as ever. More Luna please :)
All she saw were his eyes . . . and the murderous fury within them. With a terrified gasp she turned. And ran.--Oh fuck, this is such a great description. And such a delicious cliffy. :P*** (<---Me drooling for more.)
Yes! So glad he isn't impotent and now he is angry and I'm shivering with antici-
Cliffhangers.
why are you doing this to me?
what have i ever done to you?
HAHAHA.
keep it up please.
you're making me survive this hell i'm presently going through.
lots of love
xx
I'm loving this, can't believe you've left it where you have. So looking forward to the next chapter, xxx
Gah! The chapter just gets good and I can't put down my tablet, and then it's over, and I wanna throw my tablet across the desk at work in frustration! Hahaha! I'm sure a whiny one huh? Can't help it though, I absolutely love your stories.
Waiting impatiently for the next installment.
Xoxoxo