but you are a definite Slytherin sympathiser ;) - of course, I am! My hun is a 100% Slytherin!
ooh, so you think she’s fallen for him? - fallen? Don't know about that, but she is getting obsessed with him, so it is a moot point, he may be just the embodiment of what she receives. Then again, not all loves are romantic ;)
but there are aspects of him that are certainly challenging - and that is the reason we love him ;) You are doing a bang up job of portraying him, and I am almost envious of your wording skils.
And I’ve already read your review over in AO3 – and I loved it. - tnx :* I'm not so sure how much you appreciated chit-chat that came after :D I am a creature of the habit, so I usually wait for you to post the story here to read it, and I love to leave you comment here. Kill me if I know why. So next one will be posted here ;) :*
Ch13 - Interesting. We're getting quite the insight into Severus here. One line struck me, when Hermione wondered if Snape set out to be hated. It got me thinking - did he do that at Hogwarts to force students into some kind of active (perputator) role or to make them accept forever the label of victim if they passively accepted his unfair treatment of them? I feel I'm not explaining that very well, but maybe he was forcing students to stop being victims and start being in control of their lives by actively hating him and plotting against him. That makes more sense. SP
Mmmmm. So much character revelation/development. *drooling* Magnificent chapter.
He nodded. Short. Singular. No hesitation. The need must be high.--Love this visual and what it implies.
(Had the trees had been another attempt to tap into it--take out second had)
saccades--word notebook fodder :)
hacked statue of David—desecrated . . . by jealous rivals perhaps, which brought with it an intense sadness for the beauty that had been defiled, but also an odd yearning to protect him from further harm—not a particularly helpful mindset considering what she was about to do.--Love this so much. The description was great, and the emotions/thoughts that followed it were wonderfully revealing.
glinting like polished onyx behind a loose lock of hair.--Gah! Excellent.
(Who knew if it was what he wanted it.-- Take out second it.)
He hissed, his muscles tensing, appearing sharply defined as though engraved into his skin.--Brilliant description.
His voice drizzled over her, coating her, filling her crevices like dark treacle.--Again this description is perfect. Poetry.
It struck her then that he always seemed to be dressed for a funeral, as though perpetually in mourning.--Lovely observation and so true.
Laying down further layers, scars upon scars, wasn’t the answer. She knew that. She knew that now—he had shown her. Now she would have to show him. If she was the pain, then she could also be the pleasure—the pleasure she wanted to be.--Unnnh! Such a great chapter ending. And the insights into her own situation are both poignant and satisfying.
You know I need more, but I can wait until you're less busy :) Hope you're holding up.
Just read all the chapters in one day. I love this story! Please update soon.
I ADORE this story and am super excited to see where you go next! More please!
Long time waiting for the next chapter to come up, just hope everything is alright with you!!! *sits patiently and smiles*
You lead us in and torment us then leave us as if suspended over our lover unable to touch.
Tease.
Hi,
Just want to tell you that this story is the best fanfiction i've ever read ! i'm really looking forward to read what will happened next. You are definitely my favourite fanfiction's writer ever !
Oh, how the tables have turned!
I love this story!
Uuuuuuuuugh, you've drawn me in only to end it THERE?! Straight up sadistic!!
I am LOVING this story, the best Snamione I've read! I'm not a huge fan of this pairing, not because I don't like the characters together (I actually think they're hot and totally awesome together) but because so many writers make Snape so OOC it's painful to read. He's a dark, difficult charater and that's what makes him so endearing, but most stories have him as instantly falling for Hermione and changing his ways or just sickly sweet from the beginning which is frustrating. That's not Snape! You write him just as I would imagine him, so deliciously demented and struggling with demons. I am super excited to have given this a try, it's insanely hot and a perfect Snamione experience. I thank you for this and can't wait to read the next chapter.