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for Take Off Your Clothes

by Lissa

schedule June 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is actually really well written, about the only complaint about it I have is that there isn't more of it! you are descriptive, the pace procedes at a nice place, and there's no unbelievable conversation between the two. All in all, it actually sounds like a young couple in love that's proceeding to the next level permanently. I for one would love to see more of it, or others written by you.