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by SickPuppy

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schedule May 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

You have ruined Lupin forever for me. Just kidding. I like the dark twist to Lupin's character. It makes Harry's relationship with Snape more believable :) Excited to read more.

schedule May 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Beautifully written between Harry/furry counterpart and Severus. Good decision by Severus to enter the cell with Harry as Lupin would have been a complete bastard to him otherwise.

Really please Lupin was locked out of the cell. Can't wait to Severus deals with Lupin breaking into his rooms after the moon.

When is Dumbledore going to get a clue on how unpleasant Lupin is being?

Can't wait for the next the next update.

schedule May 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yeah another great chapter.

Guess Severus choose the lesser of two evils. Granted there is a relationship building between Severus and Harry. I wonder how this is going to effect their future relationship and how this is going to effect Harry come morning. At least WolfHarry got Severus off at the beginning and his eyes were a mix between yellow and green. Maybe Harry has a bit control over the wolf.

I don't see Severus taking it easy on Lupin for breaking into his apartments. Can we expect some fireworks?

Thanks again for this new chapter.

PS: I don't mind your "wittering" :-)

schedule May 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

New day new chapter. Thank you.

Parts of this chapter were hard to read but over all I liked it. I liked how Severus and Harry try to overcome their abuse together - helping each other.

Maybe it is just me but during the rape scene I thought that you switched perspectives (from third person to Severus).

Again great chapter.

schedule May 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Another great chapter. I was hoping that you would update today. Thank you.

I'm really starting to hate Remus. Is he turning into a second Greyback?

Really love how Severus is trying to help Harry. Though Dumbledore is a bit thick not realising what is happening with Harry.

Again great work.

schedule May 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This story is starting to grow on me. I do love a good Snarry story. Remus as a bad guy, You don't get that often.

Keep up the good work.