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by SickPuppy

person Apothic
schedule May 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I like where this is going! I always eagerly await updates!

schedule May 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

1. Thank you for responding to my review.

2. THERE IS AN YOU TELL PEOPLE WHEN YOU UPDATE YOUR STORIES?!?! PLEASE ADD ME I HAVE BEEN LOOKING FOR A WAY TO FIND OUT HOW STORIES GET UPDATED ON HERE!!!! I will leave my email in a separate review for reasons of this persona is my kinkier side to my public online persona... I am weird like that... But I will take it down tomorrow so hopefully you will be able to grab it before I take it down.

3. I shall skim the chapters, maybe read it fully, when you post, depending on my mood and what the topic of the chapter is. Thank you for the warning!

4. My thoughts about your new story FUCK YES!!!!!! Is it a Snarry or something else?

5. I can't wait for your next chapter as well!

schedule May 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great to see Harry is being proactive with his classes, seeking help and adjusting them to be more manageable.

Can't wait to see how Harry, Severus and possibly Lupin are the other side of the full moon. Will Harry's wolf cope without access to Severus?

schedule May 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Keep me updated i like the story, interested for what may happen in the future. Virginiabarber0126@gmail.com 

schedule May 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter and for Sev to finally give in! But if your other stories show any sort of pattern, you are going to either drag out how long it will be before everything is sunshine and rainbows for the couple and make them official or admit they love each other, or you are going to put so many bumps in the road that they will be unable to be together without something going wrong and being in their way until the last few chapters. I feel like I should have avoided reading this until you finished this story so I can skip around and read what I want (because while I love angst, I only love it when I know what is going to happen in the future and when they become an official couple and stuff like that, because sometimes the chapters are too long and my patience is too thin to wait that long so I will skip 20 chapters just to get to where I want to be and I can enjoy the story), but I also know that I love this story way too much to just stop reading it. I can't think of what to say next without rambling on more about my weird reading habits and preferences, so I am just going to move on to praising you again.

I like how you are writing the evil, mean Remus and can't wait to find out what is up his butt in the future. I love how you are writing this Dumbledore to be manipulative, but not necessarily for personal gain, but because he really is trying to help and he does actually care for Harry, he is just to blinded and stressed to look for other options than what he has in front of him that he knows will work, an almost rare manipulative Dumbledore to see. At least the prophecy is real and true here. I also love the way you are writting the Snarry pairing where their personalities are canon, but also have a new depth to them, very well-done. I am wondering about how Harry is with Hermione and Ron now that he is in classes with them, and how they are acting towards him.

See you in the next chapter!

person Apothic
schedule May 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Definitely wish fulfillment to hear Snape call Dumbledore manipulative. Can't wait for more!

schedule May 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great chapter

Now Harry's ot the Black family behind him les really stick it to his former family.

Draco was shockedbut I believe pleased with the idea of children.

schedule May 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Interesting how the relationship between Harry and Severus is developing - hope there is no fallout from werewolf cum into anal tears.

Lupin continues to be a complete a...hole but I love how Harry and his wolf were able to stand up to him post moon, lets hope that is able to continue.

How will Harry cope now he knows Dumbledore is dying? I know Severus will be able to support him.

Can't wait for the next update.

schedule May 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Angsty snape , you would have though he would have been  like fuck it. Poor harry. Love the story xx

schedule May 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh Severus! Do you have to push Harry away? What will happen with Harry and Lupin? Poor Severus that has no or hardly any self esteem (though considering his past understandable).

Keep up the great work.