First off, I really love the stories you write! I've read pretty much everything you've got up here and just can't get enough! I really need to go back and review your other works at some point...
Second, I've been following Changes since almost the beginning, and let me just say that SWEET FRIGGIN HELL this waiting is TORTURE -cries none too silently-
Great story though. I know the wait will be worth it, it always is with you SP!
In this chapter when Harry is thinking how much he wants to "jump Snape's bones", I couldn't help but think "Yeah, one bone in particular..."
I think I need to find another well written (preferably Snarry) piece while I wait for the next chapter...Maybe that will make the wait less agonizing.
Gah! So close! I actually didn't mind just getting the build-up. Anticipation makes it that much sweeter.
Although I have to say, I'm worried about all that will transpire after the shagging, the way you are setting things up here. When Dumbledore has to die, everything is going to change, and I don't want it to!
Update soon, please.
Whoops, I missed an update! But I played catch up, lol. I'll check out the other stories you mentioned (I'm not willing to butcher the spelling, lol). I'm curious to see how you bleed this plotline into resolving the main story arch. I can't wait!
I WAS ALL SET TO READ CHAPTER 16 AND LEAVE A REVIEW BUT I GOT SICK AND LOST ALL MOTIVATION TO READ FANFICTION AND BASICALLY JUST BINGED WATCHED YOUTUBE VIDEOS OVER THE PAST FEW DAYS!!!!! It is like the universe doesn't want me to keep up with this fanfiction and just keeps making these interruptions so that I can't sit at the computer and leave a good review. But I am back and feeling much better (but still tired not fully out of the woods yet), if only I could sleep as good as when I was sick (that was the best deep sleep of my LIFE!)
I am left with mixed feelings after the last chapter.
Happiness and Joy: ALMOST TO SEXY TIMES!
Fear: You mentioned a sequel... That means there might not be a happy ending and in the next story you could take any happy ending they might have and make it go bye-bye!
Annoyance: SO FUCKING CLOSE TO SEXY TIME AND YET YOU ARE GOING TO MAKE ME WAIT!!!! AND WHY WON'T SEVERUS JUST GIVE IN YET AND ADMIT HIS FEELINGS?!?! OR YOU NOT GIVING US THE SEXY TIME?!?!
More: I can't describe the rest...
I saw the title of the next chapter and immediately thought of me asking that to you with giving us Snarry sex with Snape on the top and Harry as the bottom. Have they seriously not kissed through out this entire time? And are they still doing the daily hand/blowjob?
TO SNAPE: When you said "despite knowing this can never be anything but temporary" WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU MEAN?!?! YOU CREATED A HORCRUX SO THAT YOU AND HARRY COULD STAY TOGETHER IN CASE OF YOUR DEATH!!!! WHAT DO YOU MEAN TEMPORARY?!?!
I am glad you understand the humor I am trying to put through with these "angry" little rants, I am mad, but I am definitely over exaggerating the amount of anger, how much though will be left unsaid.
Sorry this is kind of all over the place but my mind is still a little wonky from being sick and it is extremely hyper today (kill me now).
I can't wait for more either way and for my feelings to some how be destroyed before you put them back together again.
I read that you are reading Fragmented Minds. 1) I LOVE THAT PAIRING AND WISH THERE WAS MORE OUT THERE AND ALSO EASIER TO FIND! 2) I want to read that series, and I read it fully up to Sirius beating the shit out of Snape and then I stopped. I read it fully because what I have read sounds amazing, but I won't until I know if Snape lives to see Harry again or if he dies. I have read future chapters and the second part of the series fully on AO3, so I know that he is in a coma at the school and Harry made a vow with Dumbledore that keeps Snape alive, but the second part gives no indication to what happens, just which members of the pack live (AND HARRY BEING PREGNANT!). If you find out please tell me because I think the series is amazing but I seriously refuse to read it untl I know. Which is saying a lot because I will die and read anything for that pairing not caring if it includes rape or something worse, but Snape possibly dying NOPE!
I will hope fully review next chapter, or whenever I get a chance to read when you update!
I think I'm beginning to understand Harry's frustration ;). It's classic SP keep me hanging but in a brilliant way. Expert Potions Master is definitely up there on my list with Areas of expertise (1 & 2), cannot wait for more :D
Almost there! I'm excited for what's next, now that Harry is all healed up. Time for some real Snarry. Keep it coming!
Man! I'm out of touch for a week and I miss so much! I'm sorry to not have gotten to review before now, but I just got a chance to read chapters 15-18. And I have so many feelings!
First off, I really felt Harry's pain in Ch 15. He just wants to feel close to and loved by Severus and because of Lupin that can't happen (yet!). It makes me so angry. I was also a little upset with Sev for leaving Harry to sleep somewhere else. I feel like that just made it worse for Harry. He should have stayed and comforted him!
Then the return of Lupin, the bastard. But I loved that Dumbledore finally made himself useful. His decisive and and unforgiving put down of Lupin was nothing short of badass. It made me cheer. I'm glad none of them tried to spare Lupin at the last minute and finally let Harry be free of his control. I was relieved right along with Harry when it was finally over.
As for the Horcrux... I'll admit, it makes me nervous. I understand why Harry wanted Snape to do it, but was it worth the risk? Is Snape going to change a lot because of it? What will become of their relationship? There's so much I want to know! Can't wait for the next update!
Horcrux ideas hmm maybe a certain potions book wink wink. Maybe a family ring he has, a cauldron?? (Not sure on that one).harrys glasses?? Maybe a snitch that Harry uses??.
Glad Lupin is no more and his affects on Harry's life are lessening.
Good to see Harry is now healing with the purple goo.
Hope Severus is able to maintain his humanity and kindness towards Harry now he has a horcrux.\
Can't wait until Harry and Severus try and get all sexy again.
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On another note - I too enjoy the story fragmented soul despite how far apart the chapter updates are.
The horcrux situation makes sense. Snape is always one for self-sacrificing martyrdom. Please don't make the Horcrux Harry, as J.K. has already done that. I think it should be Harry's wand. That might lead to some interesting twists.
I'm enjoying where this is going. Thank you for the frequent updates!