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by SickPuppy

schedule June 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yumyumyumyumyum. After all that waiting you have really been spoiling us with the sexy times! Yet you always keep it interesting and it doesn't feel repetitive, which can be a danger in smutty stories sometimes. I love it!

Looks like Harry might be getting down to some different kind of business in the next chapter. I was wondering when he'd start actually working on the fight against Voldie again. Does he have that bottle of Felix in your version? I can't remember... or maybe you just haven't mentioned it.

person djaddict
schedule June 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh Harry, Harry, Harry. 

Good chapter! Poor Severus, the wolf has an agenda. 

person Apothic
schedule June 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

The sex in this chapter is so emotional. It really communicates a lot about their relationship. 

person Apothic
schedule June 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Very well-written scene. Definitely worth the wait. 

schedule June 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ha! I love Snape's incoherence for that last scene. Hilarious, yet somehow still hot...

I'm getting pretty nervous about how things are going to go once Harry is away from Snape for the summer. I feel like it's all going to go to hell pretty fast.

schedule June 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

"Kinda cute and kinda smutty"? You were underselling it a bit, weren't you? Loved it: the sexy times, of course, but also the awkward interaction with Dumbledore, which had me chuckling.

Glad to hear the good news on the sequel front. Keep on plugging away, I'm sure it's great!

schedule June 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

YAY TWO IN A ROW!!!!

I should have figured out that you were teasing because its you but my hope shall never die!

I would do that with my family but they don't like me saying really anything about fanfiction at ALL. Even if its complaining about a long chapter, finding an awesome story, liking an author but saying that they need help, really anything. Its the same for my brother and his X-Box games.

I really love bottom Harry, especially with Sev, because for some reason I just see him as a bottom, I don't know. I don't MIND reading a top Harry, but the preference is definitely bottom. Even if it is a top Harry, I would prefer it to be switching. There is one Snarry alpha/omega story with Sev as the omega that is really well done and smutty that I love, suprisingly. I will give you the name if you would like it.

I hope that you write Harry riding Sev at least once because I love that.

I find it weird that Dumbles is so supportive of this relationship, but then again Dumbles is weird. I just hope he is done manipulating their relationship (I give up hope that he will stop all together, the stuff with Slughorn is just proof). I can't wait for more!

schedule June 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh, SP, you never fail to impress. I could die happy if it didn't mean I'd miss the rest of Changes. I do love a good plot injected with the right amount of smut.

"Do you wish me to resume that action?"

YES, SEVERUS, CONTINUE. But really though, I laughed at how serious Severus was right then xD Just one of the many reasons why I love Sev!

But that preview...let's just say I'm looking forward to the next chapter, too.

schedule June 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Totally worth the wait!! But now I want more! And more and more...

schedule June 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Mmmmmmmm, delicious! Well worth the wait, my dear. The buildup to it was nearly as sweet as the act itself. I also love Sev's response at the end. It perfectly captures his character and his feelings about this whole situation.

Glad I could help with the sequel, in my own small way. Inspiration works in funny ways, doesn't it? I'm looking forward to reading it, whenever it appears!