Darling KS - I'm enjoying this story thoroughly. I have no suggestions for the story line, I think you're doing great.
I'm currently working on my first HP FF ever as well - posted here and on FF.net as After Happily Ever After - so I know how much reviews help give confidence. I read very very few WIP stories, because I'm too impatient. This one caught me up quickly. Dramione is my second favorite pairing (Snamione is my first), so I'm always looking for good ones.
I cannot wait until HG and DM are together again now that they're almost on the same page.
I'm going to try and find you on FF.net so I can get that preview! I'm over there as LissaDream. If you can find me, please do!
Anxiously awaiting your next chapter!
xLD
Yay for the update! Watching for moooree!!
Really enjoying this story, looking forward to future chapters xxx
This is such a fun story. I'm not usually into Het, but your Draco is delicious. Looking forward to the next installment.
I think you did a good job of taking the blame off Rob and breaking them up amicably. Although I'm not a Ron fan myself. Now let the lemons with Malfoy begin ;)
Loving it. Looking forward to the next chapter
Cute chapter! I'm glad I noticed the name change!
I'll admit, I wasn't very interested in the story until it was titled, lol, snob that I am apparently. Am going onto the sixth chapter I do believe, and I'm thoroughly enjoying this! Well written and the story flow is easy to follow. I tend to be a detail whore so the more the better as far as I'm concerned, there's good detail here but I could always use more. Not a criticism, just a wish. Am glad to see you dont plan on abandoning this and that its primarily already written. Am looking forward to the rest of this delightful story
Killerkitty
Thank you for adding a title. I'm looking forward to the big chapter and also for dumping Ron. Please post again soon.
I love the writing style and this story has me hooked ! Please keep writing, i am impatiently waiting for future cgaoters; this is such a good read! The build up is perfect, keeping your readers on the edge of their seats wanting more!
Here are some suggestions/iseas for titles:
Change of Hearts; Who Knew? ; Forbidden Romance ; Hungry Hearts ; Lustful Secrets
Hope those helped ;) <3
Love, Wings of Sage