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for Temporary Mate

by Lomonaaeren

schedule June 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hmmmm mid-air sexy time. Intriguing. I like.

I'm a bit mad at Harry, though. I know he's trying to do right by Draco's human side and trying to protect himself as well, but his final act was high-handed, in my opinion. Draco is not going to be happy when he wakes up.

person Apothic
schedule June 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is a great chapter. Excellent writing. Can't wait for the next update!

person SParker
schedule June 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

about #4...

Aaahh man! You HAD to stop it there??? :-p

person Apothic
schedule June 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I really love this story. Thanks for the update.

schedule June 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yum! I just love the dynamic you're creating here as the emotions get deeper, and they can't sort out what's "real" and what's Draco's Veela. Absolutely delicious. You're striking a good balance between action and emotional content as well. Can't wait for more!

person SParker
schedule May 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

about #3

Umm...you are going to explain what tha' hell the thing was???

Oh I noticed you don't post like you used to. Busy?

schedule May 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Reading and waiting for more!!! 

person SParker
schedule May 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

about #2...

Well I'm finally caught up on stories.

This is going to be an interesting journey, it starting off pretty good...can't wait for the sh*tstorm.

schedule April 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm really enjoying this so far! I love the tension you create by having them acknowledge their mutual attraction even though they know they should resist acting on it. Can't wait to see what happens!