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for Temporary Mate

by Lomonaaeren

person SParker
schedule January 14, 2018 at 12:00 AM

about #21...

Gotta love those Veela instincts and commend Draco on his restraint. :-)

Btw, do you still have the same email addy?

schedule December 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Another great chapter, and very powerful. I like that Draco was able to see what Harry really needed, which was to be listened to, rather than letting his anger and his Veela nature get the best of him. They're bond is really solidifying now.

Can't wait for more!

schedule November 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch20 - They are both so sweet in this chapter! Absolutely freaking adorable. SP

schedule November 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wonderful chapter! I loved all the details of the cottage, especially the figurines. I would be happy to see more chapters with them there, although I understand why you would feel you had to move on with the story.

As always, looking forward to the next installment!

schedule November 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hurray for Narcissa! She's always been the stronger, smarter Malfoy anyway, so it's not surprising that she would stand by her son. I knew Draco was going to refuse Lucius from the getgo but it was still very satisfying to see how thoroughly he dismissed him.

And now they have a whole little holiday to look forward to. I hope we get to see some of their time together in the cottage.

schedule November 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch19 - I love your Narcissa! (Both in this and in 'Narcissa Militant'). She's so badass. I snorted when she told Draco to call Lucius an imbecile. And it's great that she's on Harry and Draco's side. Also, I think it was good that Draco seems to be understanding Harry a bit better, the 'He's so scarred' was just so beautiful. SP

schedule October 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ergh, stupid Lucius. Trust him to be the most difficult about this. Of course, I'm not worried that Draco would agree to his demands and abandon Harry, but I do worry about how far Lucius is willing to go to break them up.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

schedule October 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I missed some chapters, so bumper update! So much has happened, and Draco is being awesome. Love that he's finally reassessing his views of Harry and is being so good about driving away idiots (although Harry is tough enough to do that generally - he's too nice to be the git needed for really pushy people though). So sweet. SP

schedule October 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

That ending though! This is really good. I like the chemistry between Harry and Malfoy. Though I do think Harry is a bit of a butthole and needs to give in or be more understanding sometimes but I give him props on being so loving to his partner. 

person Jan
schedule October 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

It's nice that both Ron and Hermione are willing to try for Harry's sake, please update chapter 17 soon.