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for Temporary Mate

by Lomonaaeren

schedule April 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Great ending! I'm glad Hermione and Draco had their little confrontation and were able to come to an understanding. Draco will prove his commitment, in the end.

A thoroughly enjoyed ride, all around. I can't wait to see what HP/DM story you cook up next!

schedule March 31, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Aww I’m sorry to see this end. Veela Draco is my favorite!! I almost wish to have seen more of their lives. Maybe see them interact on Asovima again. Or maybe adopt children or find out Harry can have children. Lol you know the gushy lovey dovey stuff. Wonderful job (again). I’m alway so happy when you finish a new story. 

person SParker
schedule March 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM

The End...

I really liked the idea of how you did the bonding bracelets and how Hermione wasn't readily accepting of the bond right away...something different for a change regarding her character, but hopefully not done all the time. :-)

person Jan
schedule March 26, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Absolutely loved this story, it was a sweet ending, thank you for writing it.

schedule March 20, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Loved the ceremony! But loved what happened after even more :) Very hot.

This continues to be one of my favorite fics on the site, so I'm sad that it seems to be coming to a close. Great work!

schedule March 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

A nice, relaxed chapter, very much enjoyed. Even the discussion with Kingsley was less fraught than it could have been, I thought.

I like that Harry is getting comfortable with Narcissa and is able to show more of the parts of himself most don't get to see. It's hard to imagine him ever getting that way with Lucius, though.

I'm glad Harry's keeping his name. It's been clear throughout this fic that while he loves Draco, he wants to be his own man. I've always liked that about Harry and I've enjoyed seeing it come up a lot in this story.

schedule March 2, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Wow, I step away for a while and I miss so much! You really took me on an emotional rollercoaster with those most recent chapters. My heart went out to Draco after what Lucius did but I love the way Harry handled it, both in taking care of Draco and standing up to Lucius. In fact, I like the way Harry is handling himself in pretty much all aspects of this fic. He's being reasonable when he needs to be and assertive when he needs to be too.

I'm loving their bond the more I read. It seems like you're close to wrapping things up here but I hope we get to see their bonding ceremony at least. Looking forward to the next chapter, as always!

person SParker
schedule February 11, 2018 at 12:00 AM

about #24..

...who wouldn't want a 'marriage' that's like what Harry & Draco has. Tho I was hoping Harry would have been a bit more sterner with Lucius for breaking Draco's heart!

Btw, have a story idea....

person Toddy
schedule February 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM

That told Lucius.  I wonder how long it has been since someone stood up to him like that.  I love it, Whitmore.

person Jan
schedule January 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Yes please! It's about time someone put those reporters in their place, especially Skeeter! Please update chapter 23 soon.