poor Harry that was a hell of a day for him, and I'm still thinking Dumbledore is an evil mastermind! Jejeje definitely his conditioning of Harry it's running so smoothly that Harry is beginning to think that having peed himself on it was his fault!
really I want to know what's going to happen next!
Goodness, keep going with the punishment! SP
good is chapter
I've avoided this so far, but it's surprisngly engaging and well written. I liked the idea of the Length Line (even if Dumbles was only lying), and a story of Harry belonging to Lucius or Snape would be delicious! Sp
Definitely this Dumbledore is an evil mastermind!! Can't wait to read more of your stories!!
Great chapter!I Dumbledore is a master of manipulation and definitely when the week finish Harry will be his pet! I bet the new attire will be one of leather or a chastity belt! Jejeje
See you!!
While it had less kinkiness than we would have liked, it does make the story more interesting than the just initial kinkiness that you introduced with the story in the first chapter by adding a layer of mystery to it in a way. Now I am wondering about how far will Dumbledore take his manipulations with Harry, what will Dumbledore do to Harry, how will Dumbledore keep Harry naive and/or as a pet should his manipulations be proven wrong and Harry finds out, and then there are so many questions around Harry, his ability to stay naive this whole time, if he ever finds out, and his feelings, thoughts, and reactions to Dumbledore's manipulations, whether he believes them or not.
I also noticed that you have "scat" as a warning, so I'm not sure whether you JUST added that or if it was there the last chapter, but it does make me curious on how far the scat will go (a.k.a. will he have to eat it or clean Dumbledore's butthole or something like that), because I know that the tag can mean such a broad range of things. I look forward to finding out.
As for the story you are thinking of writing with the Length Law being real and him being paired with either Lucius or Snape, I CAN'T WAIT! And why not have them both own Harry if you find you cannot decide, or flip a coin, whatever works for you.
I hope I am not annoying you with these long reviews... I am just very enthusiastic when it comes to fanfiction...
Waoo this Dumbledore is truly the master in manipulation!! And since Harry is just a child he can be easily manipulated by him, but this is the plot jejejeje
on the other hand Your idea sounds great! And I'd love to read more about it!
I really like this story. I laughed so hard on the second chapter, i cant wait for the next one.
Please post chapter 2!! Your doing a great job!