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for Learnt in the Cradle

by Sasunarufan13

schedule May 25, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I love this one. Wish you would expand on it. Make it a full length story as they get older and mate. Great job. 

schedule June 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

That was too cute:) I can't stop smiling and cooing like a crazy person. Thanks for sharing.

schedule May 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Really enjoyed it. 

schedule April 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I loved this!! I'm kind of sad that I can't keep reading more and watch then grow up together.

schedule April 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I really like this one!! I think you should keep this as a prologue and write a longer story going from there into their school years and them getting closer and finally becoming intimate. I think it has great potential. 

person djaddict
schedule April 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I thought you did brilliantly! Well done.

And since you asked...

"That particular bloodline had become rather deluded  throughout the years"   - diluted

 

schedule March 31, 2017 at 12:00 AM

That was soooo cute! Loved it