As soon as his hand dropped to her bum and they were pressed up against each other I just knew that someone was going to see them. They were playing with fire the moment they stepped onto the dance floor it was inevitable really. Looking forward to reading more! xx
Congratulations on your brave foray into smuttville. Nice sexy times between our two favourites. Well done. x
Another fantastic chapter! There's so much going on with so many people, it's so exciting! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Hey ~*LissaDream!
I just wanted to say that I love your story sooooo much. Its an incredible joy to read it.
First I thought I would wait until I read the last chapter, to give you a long review, but I cant wait, because your story ist that gorgeous.
Youre type of writing is very good and me, as a reader, can easily take place in your story and 'be a part of it' . I understand the charcaters behavior and can feel their feelings with them.
I hope you stay writing ... oh yes, I have to add that your story has come to Germany :)
Im a german user, who really enjoys your work :D and I hope that excuses mistakes in language or vocabulary which I'll probably make.
Greetings! Little Stranger
Hello again! :)
I actually finished chapter 19 and I hope the next update comes soon!
I told you in my earlier review that I'm in love with youre story and your kind of writing and I just can repeat it.
The plot is fascinating and I'm imagine what could happen in the next chapters ^^
I really hope you stay motivated and creativ so that we reader get the chance to read your great story
Greetings! LittleStranger
I'm really enjoying your fluid style. The characerisations are believable and likeable and I love the burgeoning relationship between our two favourites.
“All though watching Ron struggle with a boner all year might be enough to make me vomit.” – bahaha, me too ;)
I loved Snape’s warm welcome. I’d give him a warm welcome too :) And Hermione’s enjoyment of his enjoyment was so sweet.
How long will Snape keep his hands to himself? Looking forward to finding out x
What luck for me that the first story I read here was yours! I was so nervous to read a HP adult fanfic; I worried for nothing! Your writing is spellbinding, the flow is flawless, and there's real emotion here rather than just a bunch of sex! I am truly enjoying watching Snape open up and become more "human". Lizzie is a hoot, but also a "real" character, she's easy to relate to. You keep magical elements in the story rather than just the characters, and it makes it so much more engaging. Also, the Severus/Hermione pairing is one I never had thought of! Great, great, GREAT read! I can't wait to see how this ends up!
No one has ever needed someone to slap some sense into him than Snape in that last chapter!
The more I read the more I wish Lizzie was my friend she is so badass it's unreal. Her standing up to Snape had be bursting out laughing. She is quickly becoming my favourite Puff!
Oh and the quidditch match was just brilliant.
Can't wait to read the rest :)
Thank you ! Thank you! For this amazing complex story! I love where you have taken everyone and I can't wait to see where they go from here. Snape will lose his mind when Hermione gets taken but I know he'll move heaven and earth to get her back. Keep up the amazing writing:)
Nooooooooooo!!! I want the snape and hermonie loving!!! Omg hopefully things will turn out ok!!!!