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for ...After Happily Ever After

by Lissa

schedule June 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wow! Love that Snape proposed. Poor Hermione... heavy stuff, but as always, it's exceptionally well written. I see I only have a couple chapters left until I'm caught up...I'm dreading not having lots of completed chapters still to go..lol. Sooo good!

schedule June 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Thank you for this chapter. After what she went through, this was lovely. I loved it that she hugged Draco! That was priceless! And poor Draco has no idea his father was involved. Im so ready for Lucius Malfoy to go down. Please update soon! I'm so disappointed I don't have any more chapters to read!! This story is so good! Also ready for more Lizzie/Draco time ;) 

person Mistress
schedule June 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Really good job on this one. I love how Hermione is portrayed to be strong spirited and courageous rather then broken down and weak.   The story is by far one of my favorite. In Words of our favorite professor "good job INDEED" 

schedule June 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ohh boy!! Really hoping she chooses Draco. But, I hate to see Ron get hurt. Once again, another welll written and engaging chapter!!

schedule June 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Really loving your Snape and Hermione. You capture them very well!! Loving how their relationship is more than just sex. Also, I really liked the Snape and Minerva interaction. Great stuf!!!

schedule June 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wow!! Great chapter! Despite what happened, she and Draco belong together. Anxious to see what happend when she see's Draco again! Soo good!!

schedule June 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

The chapter before last was difficult to read and I'm glad you kept it to just one chapter. This last one was so well written and I love that Hermione and Snape were both really strong and their love won. She isn't the smartest witch of her time for nothing. Can't wait for the next installment... even if it will be a little while to wait. Take care! xx

person Lunarose
schedule June 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh man getting into some emotional waters. I love it! Haha! Especially love the end of Ch 22 Snape's line about everyone he loves dies. You can feel his complete desolation. Absolutely brilliant.

person Mistress
schedule June 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Loved the new chapter. Poor Severus and Hermione. And I really thought Lucius would change his ugly ways and become a better person. In my story I'm making him a good guy. Or at least as good as Lucius can be :) Waiting to see what happens with our favorite couple in the next chapter. 

person Mistress
schedule June 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh my, didn't even see that you posted another chapter. Very dark, unsettling, but enjoyable nevertheless. Hopefully Hermione can pull through all the awful things those bastards did to her and still allow herself to be happy with the man she loves.