Wow what a what would you do moment!. Poor Hermione please be snapes baby, wow angst galor.
In that one moment you see the true strength of his character. This chapter is possibly my favourite for that very reason.
I have a theory about where I think this might go. I can't wait to see if I'm right! xx
Hello again!
Shame on me, but I was covered with school stuff so I didn't checked if you uploaded a new chapter.
So I saw the 'new' chapters this morning. But on one hand is it good for me, becasuse I had a couple of 'new' chapters. It's like a christmas present in June :-)
The speech from Harry on Yule Ball was very emotional. I read it twice because I liked it so much. The choice of words and his way of speaking (which was just in my head, but I think you had the same picture in front of you while writing this paragraph) was really realistic.
That he asked Ginny to marry him in front of every one was very brave ^^ But I think every one knows that she does not has any other answer to him than 'YES'
I also like the couple Lizzie and Draco. I hope that he does not know about the awful things his father is doing.
I don't know if I said this before, but I love your Severus Snape. You write him very realistic and I often think that his behavior would be like this if he would be in this situation. I don't like storys where the charakters act strange and not like the role they have, without any reason.
It was very mean that the death eaters have destroyed this wonderful day from Severus and Hermione. But also in this case I thought that their behavior was very realistic.
I was glad that she was able to hide her ring.
The following dark chapter was written very good. I like your choice of words in this case and your description of the feelings Hermione has.
I have the feeling that it was not the end of the torture through the death eaters and especially through Lucius Malfoy.
Maybe Draco knows nothing about the things his father does, but by telling him about what happend and the situation he helps him unwillingly? I do hope that Lizzie don't have to suffer too.
Oh I have to add I loooove the chapter in the hospital, exactly one sentence : " Two hours and a shouting match with a couple Mediwitches later, both Severus and Hermione were snuggled together in the enlarged hospital bed. "
I laughed really loud because I saw it in front of me, how the big dark wizard discusses with a tough nurse.
I was really excited about your answer to my last reviews. I'll take time to write reviews because they are the only thing the author earns for their storys and I think it is important as a reader to give the opinion and constructive feedback to the story because it is the only way the author can make himself, in this case herself, a better author and keeps herself motivated.
Your family history sounds very interesting. If you'll ever be in Germany you can feel free to visit me as a great fan of yours ^^
I enjoyed your story and I promise to check more often for new chapters!
Greetings! LittleStranger
Absolutely loved this chapter. It's good that he allows her friends to be there for her even though they're not big fans of each other. Understanding is a key to any relationship. Also, a description of Severs' wand seems to be very accurate. Did a little research on it myself and it looks like that just might be it. Good job, girl.
Devastatingly sad chapter. Poor Hermione. I couldn't help the tears as I read this chapter. Ron and Harry's reaction was expected, hopefully they will come around. Well written, as always!
Another great chapter! Just love the interaction between Draco and Lizzie. Really sweet how he protected her. Soo ready for them to hook up!!
For a grown man, Snape really is an adolescent sometimes. Dam him!! But, you my dear, write him so well. Another great chapter!
Awwww...this was a sweet and touching chapter. LOVED the make-up sex!! Soo good!!!!
Thrilled for Draco and Lexie!! So glad they talked it out. But, poor Ron!! Seriously, that boy deserves some happiness. Another great chapter! Loved it :)
That was soo HOT! Absolutely loved it. You write smut so well!...and that's a true compliment. It's very heard to write sex scenes, at least for me. Sooo good!!,