I want to know if I can translate fifty silver sickles into Portuguese?
Obviously not for everyone, but I definitely liked it. Though your sex-scene writing style isn't what I generally like, I really loved the way you ended it. The tension you create at the beginning is a nice lead-in, and I also appreciated the way you tied in Malfoy's bigotry with his desire for Hermione, instead of writing it off as nonexsistent. Though some will obviously not like the way the sex-scene started, I'd definitely applaud your use of Malfoy;s cunning to make her say she wanted it before actually going ahead.
My only note would be to maybe shorten up the beginning. All the details in your introduction could be a bit more concise.
Interesting but highly disturbing. Like a rape "fantasy". I despise non consent, but the Biblical tie in in the end made it interesting
Very sexy ;) I've never heard that "law" before but I believe I like it now! Nice piece.