I hope you're still updating this, im entranced! !
Captivating...absolutely one of the most captivating stories I have read in a long time. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Chapter length is fine. I think most people don't get many reviews, cause many readers don't have much to say. The story is decent so far; and its hard to give constructive criticism since I am not sure what would make it better. The characters don't act quite believably, but I've read pretty good stories where they don't either. I think just keep writing and reading and you will naturally improve; don't worry about reviews too much.
Please update. When u get the chance this story is awesome!
I am veryy sorry for being an unfaithfuk reviewer - but I'm a faithful reader, and I really appreciate your work which is much better than other unimaginative scribbles here. Please don't be discouraged by lack of reviews - I know rewiews are a mean of quantifying one's quality of work, but I also see many reviews fall along the line of unfiltered fangirly (the irony!)squeals, somewhat instantaneous reactions to lurid stimuli, so usually more accessible and digestible materias garner (undue) praises. Not that abundance of cringey reviews can excuse lack of honest appreciation of good works, but we human beings are quite lazy to properly express gratitude for a good read, especially on mobile! Anyway, what I want to say is, your work is probably miles better in terms of quality compared to other more reviewed works, heaven knows I never can stand to read more than five paragraphs, and in most cases can't be even induced to open those better reviewed works - they are simply painful to read. Thank you so much for your quality writing!
I love this story, I honestly do!! I think the whole problem that i have is that there neeeeeeeeeeeeedddsss to be more updates. I am dying to know what happens next! I can't wait until the next chapter! I truly love your story!!
Please post more!
I love it!
Hello
i seem to have fallen in love with this story and would very much love to read more on it.I love this dark draco and Hermi story. Its a slwo build to me and i love where it is going. keep up the wonderful work.
Thank you
safa
Hello, i am intrigued. Please continue, hope you feel well enough to go home soon.
this is very wonderful! ive been an avid reader (and now writer) over at FF, and i've come here to read more darker stories. your story was the first that i've chosen, and i have to say i'm hooked! i really do hope you update soon, but i understand life happens! also, im sorry to hear you're in hospital, i do hope that you get well as soon as possible! but until then, im going to continue to figure out out to get email notifcations for you and you're story!