Chapter 17
Crying right along with Hermione. The beginning of the chapter had me so hopeful for them! They certainly can never do things the easy way, can they? Lucius, though....what an interesting twist. Avidly awaiting the next. x~*Lissa
PS: Thank you for the review, again. Reviews from you mean more beause you're such a great story teller. I'll address it with Chapter 9 next week. I was up until 1a writing last night! I'm becoming obsessed. hahahaha xo
Loving the story, can't believe the sudden twist, where is it going to go? Can't wait to find out xxxx
Uh oh. He got too close to feeling, didn't he? And her confession about her time with him when he was unconscious scared him? Sigh... I now he's trying to guard himself, but pushing her away and bring Lucius into the mix can't be the right answer. I hope this isn't as awful and awkward as I think it will be. Thanks for the update. :-) Looking forward to more of this tale of the scared and the petrified. lol HG4eva
Well, I'm a little late on the band wagon but I love it! I have devoured your 16 chapters in about 2 days and am now impatient for chapter 17, lol. The way you flip between view points can be confusing some times, but the flow is undeniably captivating. I know I've read stories of yours before, but now I get to go back through and reread my favorites! I can't wait for more!
I finally returned so now you will get the spam from me, all the missing chapter reviews :D
I hope you are having a wonderful time in Japan. Send me some sushi! - oh! I had most wonderful time! And believe me, sushi is the last food from Japan that you want ;)
hahah, I wonder how long you will remain patient? - it is Snape so not for long, I'm sure
Chapter 14
It is adoring how he tries to be logical when in fact he don't want her to belong to anyone else :) But I think I love more the way she chose to make her point to him. There can't be any misinterpretations in her actions.
I just love how you made him vocal :)
"like a boat in a wild ocean" - great description
"the fact that he wants to be the one. And not simply the one to cure her." - this made me feel goosebumps, fantastic! Hot sex scene, as always, I can hardly pick one point without c/p the whole chapter :)
Chapter 15
"And it isn’t the only sense to have improved." - HA!!!
Great description of their subtle dance, back and forth, trying to appear casual when they are anything but.
“Will you have dinner with me tonight?” - if you could only see my grin, how big it is :D
"oily skin of a river slithering beyond the weeds and concrete of a moonlit vacant lot." - great visual
It is heartwarming and heartbreaking at the same time, the way he tells his story to her. And that is Snape, so the story holds so much more than just a "date conversation" that it would normally be. Him taking her to his house, it is so...so...It is important to him that she understand. To understand him. I love it <3
Chapter 16
"who seems to naturally position himself to protect her from potential threat" - you made me melt into the puddle with this
“On whether you mind if I eat you./I believe I have found a new one.” - sqweeeeeellllllllll!!!!
“Because I need to at least appear to be able to resist you.” - resist? Is she insane?! Why would anyone resist him?
Hahahaha, it took them only 16 chapter to get to the bed :D
"over the contours of his jaw as it rolls delicately beneath her fingertips with the rhythm of his soft, passionate lips." - lovely, visual, sensual, perfect description
“I don’t know a woman alive who would turn this down.” - amen to that :D
"a cello and he the cellist" - and once again you did it! You managed to pick my favorite instrument :D
Sex scene again, no point in c/p the entire part of the chapter. I just love it, every single bit of it <3
This is already too long, so I won't write more. And I'm still adjusting, jet lag is is a killer, on top of all air condition in aeroplane gave me a sinus inflammation with high fever. I'm trying to get myself in line, tomorrow is a big day (saturday), I have HP event with my ngo and I'm cosplaying Professor Trelawney and work at Fortune Telling booth, so I have to make preparations. But you will hear more from me and of my trip in the next chapter.
If you don't have me on FB, my nick is Kvarta Sulless, try to add me or if you can't just PM me (there are plenty pictures there already and more to come soon) ;)
Hugs&Kisses&Sushi ^_^ <3 xx
Simply delicious. I'm a puddle. You're amazing.
I am glad she freely accepts her feelings for him and that he is opening up to her. Severus being a gentleman in all things is lovely, especially considering where they started and how horrible he was to her. I hope her medical injection helps tremendously, since the method was so appreciated. tee hee hee Thanks again! HG4eva
Mmmmmm! So tasty. I loved the whole entire scene with them in bed. When he picks up the pace and really gives it to her, the descriptions were so fucking fantastic. *Drooling* Must read again later.
Fav lines:
"But I do have extremely . . . refined . . . tastes.”--Hahahaha! Yeeeees. :P
“I think perhaps we should do ‘anything else’ first.”--Amen.
"They would consider him quite the same . . . commanding, terrifying, awe-inspiring . . . and requiring a period of . . . adjustment.”--Bahahaha!
"She now lies prone and willingly compliant, like an instrument—a cello and he the cellist—his cock the bow that weaves rhythmically in and out, drawing a symphony of breathy groans from the resonance chamber of her chest."--Unnnnnh! Such word deliciocity!
Ooooo! Hermione's out in public, walking through the Great Hall like a sensorial badass.
And Snape's opening up to her (like a psychological badass), drawing her into his inner world and his past.
AND he's getting better, sniffing strawberries and regaining his tactile talents.
I want them to go back his place too (and for some reason I want there to be lots of naked hugging). ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ I can't explain myself.
Fav lines:
The use of the phrase ‘peas in a pod’ is of particular concern.--Hahahaha!
"oily skin of a river slithering beyond the weeds and concrete of a moonlit vacant lot."--Love this description.
"He stares for a moment before slowly turning his hand over and lifting her fingers to rest on his. Gently rubbing his thumb across them, he begins to talk."--So dreamy <3
I loved Snape's whole backstory bit. Very realistic. And revealing.
I'm still dying to know what went on between them in the past. What are you hiding?!
Chapter 15
I'm sorry life has been complicate. I'll add your nom de plume to my prayer/intentions list. Life is just hard. Something I'm learning more the older I get. I hope things resolve themselves in the way you need.
I created a fanfiction.net account. I cannot seem to find you. I changed my pen name here to match the one I could get there. LissaDream. If you have a moment, toss me a PM so I can find you? Thanks, love.
Bloody fantastic chapter again, but killing me with the brevity. I will patiently wait another. I feel like Oliver Twist. "Please, sir, may I have some more?" with an empty bowl and sad puppy eyes!