Sorry for being quiet this long, things in my life took unfortunate and sad turn and I didn't have much brain capacity to verbalise my opinion. I'm still far from ok, but at least I'm semi-functional now :)
you are gluttons for punishment - too true ;)
Chapter 22
Sad and painful chapter. I like his battle between being the father, destroying the baby and Shakespeare like culmination - death for all of them. And the doubt, they both question their feeling for each other.
Ok, the twist with Sophia's origin...I wasn't expecting that :D
Chapter 23
And this chapter is cruel and full of hope in equal measures. Cruel because it tells the story of life she desires and horror of what might be if she pressist in her desires. It gives her/them hope but not solid hope, more of a chance to hope with uncertain outcome.
The pressing question now is how Severus would react to these news, and will she tell him about the potion and Sophia? I hope we will found out soon :)
Take care of yourself, stay happy <3
Hugs&Kisses xx
OMG i will never think that Lucius will be such a "good friend" i know he is a perverted man but...... and i love severus and i dont like what he did, but i like him. thank for the fic and i dont know how to do for make an alert for this story for your next chapter, thanks anyway
First, kudos to you on your writing and the way your brain works! This story is twisted and smart and you should feel very proud. :-) I am very confident in Severus' brewing abilities. If he took ten years to perfect it to the best of his abilities, it's better than any potion most others could have made work. They just have to believe in him and in themselves. I ache for that poor child though. That's a LOT to put on her little 11-year old shoulders. I hope they can fix it and get her back to her time and her family. I like the fact that you had Harry and Ginny back in Hermione's life in the future, even if it was all ruined. I look forward to seeing Severus' reaction and I also wonder how much Minvera knows of the truth. Thanks!! HG4eva
Oh, thank Merlin. Grandpa Severus has a plan. Soul Stealing. And now they just have to time everything perfectly and save the world. No problem.
Oh, and yes, your genealogy brain teaser was too difficult. (Okay, it only took one re-read to clarify, but that's a lot of thinking in the middle of eating breakfast.)
Re: Chapter 23
...A loophole! Yay!
I think I blubbered through this whole chapter.
"My father told Harry that it had been satisfying to take Lily Potter from him...twice." BLOODY HELL!
"...but seeing you...and Grandpa...and having you smile politely at me...or not at all in Grandpa's case, has been really difficult." *SOB*
I love your writing. It's wonderful. Thank you SOOO much for updating today. I'm going through withdrawals. I'm reading 5 WIPs right now, and you're the only one who's updated since the 18th. I'm going stark raving mad. LOL! I might have to stop reading WIPs! LMBO! ;o) Just kidding, but in all honesty. Thank so much. This will get me through a few more days.
Cheers! ~*Lissa
WOW! Didn't see that one coming. I guess that means she is to have the baby, but I hope they also find a way to not give birth to the next Voldy and somehow accept that they can be happy together despite any lingering horcrux-like curse. Thanks again! HG4eva
Re: Chapter 22
Welp, didn't see THAT one coming either.^_^
Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat????????
I don't even understand what I just read. I'd better go reread the whole ending one more time. (Or a thousand more times.)
Okay, so she's the child of Hermione's future son, Roland Snape, who obviously became a Dark Lord and had a kid with Harry and Ginny's daughter, Lily. (People really need to stop naming their kids after past family members.)
(Merlin's balls! That was family tree fuckery for my brain.)