(Sniff) this story was so beautiful
*sobs* You're evil, I was fine up until the end of the last chapter, but that bit got me right in the feels! But what an excellent story it was, I'm glad Sophia still existed. My question is did Severus' own senses improve after the piece of Voldemort's soul left him in the same way Hermione's went back to normal?
I love Sophia, she truly is the bravest. I love your version of what happened and what could have happened. As I found this after it had been completed I didn't review every chapter. I have found that you respond to every comment in the beginning of the next, so I didn't think that a later review would be polite. I didn't want you to revisit every chapter to see them or to respond. The comments to the reviews were as wonderful as the chapters.
So thank you again for a great story.
Samantha. Aka Coingurl
Hi,
I have LOVED this story! Very well written. Amazing plot, well executed. Fantastic character portrayal. Kept me reading until the very last word.
I do wish that there had been more to the climax and end of the story, it seemed to build the tension and then it was over.
BUT, having said that it is still one of my fave HP fanfics at the moment.
I will definitely be reading more of your stuff, I like your style.
Thank you 😊
Rosario xx
So beautiful done, my dear DS. Cannot wait to see what you bring to us next! Lots of love!
Yaaaaaaay! I'm so glad everyone got their happily ever after. And I'm even more glad that Sophia got to exist. Plot-wise, I think this might be one of my favorites of yours. (But I'm still going to go with ITH as my absolute favorite.) The story idea was great, and you sucked me into their fucked up world from the very first chapter. (But then again, you always do that.) The slow reveal of what was really going on was great (very Moriarty-ish), and I loved the shift in both characters as the story progressed. They're both extremely cut off from the world at the start, but at the end (after the Voldy vaccine) they're engaged with not only each other but the people around them. The subtle shift throughout the whole story, as they learned to trust each other and themselves, was masterfully done.
Fav bits:
It’s a bit annoying because Hermione feels herself succumbing to a decidedly drab greyness that makes her look like she’s been left out in the sun too long.--Great description.
Stouches--word notebook
I loved the whole bit with the watch and Severus's obsession with time.
"That’s all we need,” Severus responds. His hand is instantly on Hermione’s knee. Hermione looks at him and can’t help grinning as he sexily nudges up one eyebrow.--Mmmm, sexy feels. Perfect. :)
The ending section with Sophia was excellent. So sweet. Great ending (and an excellent juxtaposition to the bleakness of the start).
As always, I'm looking forward to whatever you have in store for us next. (((((End of story hugs)))))
Another awesome ending! Thank you so much for sharing your stories and your talent with us all. I look forward to whatever you chose to write about next.
Brava, my dear!!! Another job very well done! I am really sorry you needed to use this as therapy, but I am glad it could help. I hope you are healing and geeling better every day!!
As for the story, the arc Severus went through was amazing! I loved the way you wrote the tale, but also how it very much started as an Hermione story, but ended a strong Severus one. The fact that they could all feel such love and happiness after all they'd been through was lovely. And, I LOVED that Sophia not only survived, but thrived. Severus' choked up admission in the end was perfect. Thank you one last time. HG4eva
I fell off the face of the world, and when I come back, you've finished the story! This was surprising and intriguing and phenomenal! Before I disappeared, we still didn't know who Sophia was nor what was going on with Hermione. Then, BAM! Just, wow. I can't wait to read any other stories you have! Thank you for such a wonderful story
Oh, what a cliff hanger.. Still loving this story xxx