I swear, each chapter you write gets better and better. I absolutely adore this
I love love LOVE this chapter!!! The relationship between Lucius and Draco is finally working out, and tbh it's about time. Anyhow the Quartet is in harmony and until, the next chapter so am I.
oh my god
i love this fic but id love to see more of cockshanks and what he gets up to at the manor and more hermiones relationships with other people and harry and ron as of late it been quartet
AND ITS GREAT
but i just dont want crockshanks to be forgotten
thank you! i love your work!
Okay, I'm not one to review a lot but that said I had to review this chapter. I absolutely love this story. This is my favorite chapter to date. The last section of dialogue between Severus and his younger self was probably the most powerful thing I have read lately. I love that he recognized his inner self that he has kept hidden. The whole last sentence took my breath away. Kudos to you for the wonder writing. Keep it up. I can't wait to read more.
I literally cried. I had to lock myself in my room Ahaha. You're doing an absolutely amazing job :D This story has made me laugh and cry and feel something else I'm ashamed to say *blush* ;)
Oh my gawd. Plot twist, you're so evil Ahaha :'D
Oh my gosh, the end of this chapter had me in stitches. You're an absolute genius
hello! I was a silent reader and have decided to change my ways... anyhow I love this fic so much! Each character complements each other so well and the new elemental magic is so interesting! Will all of their powers increase after sex or being together? What about permanent magical increases? Do they have to be *in* the elemnt to feel its magic or can they just be around it? so many questionsss rip
anyway, I will be here eagerly checking for updates... bye!
In all honesty, I shed a tear when I came back to refresh this page and check for updates, as is my daily routine. I love your writing, the humour, the plot twists. It keeps me coming back for more. Oh, and the amazing sexy scenes that are so detailed :)
Chapter 50 –
Oops, I mislabelled my last review as ch50 but it was obviously 49.
Well everything really went tits up in this chapter, didn’t it? Just goes to show how quickly things can fall apart.
Faves -
‘Not without a nice pike to display it on.’ – now that was unexpectedly macabre, I like it.
‘Personal owls’ – I don’t even know what this is but I want one submitted on my behalf right now! :)
‘Harry looked as if he was having a stroke. “The ferret?”’ – hahah, no love lost there, then?
‘as if someone had pulled a plug in his neck, his face drained of color’ – this was fantastic, wonderful visual.
‘Are you fucking your way through the whole damn Slytherin directory?”’ – ummm . . . sorta . . .
So now what does she do?
I know what it’s like to have years of work taken away from you overnight. It’s hard to rebuild. I’m wondering what business opportunities may arise. Potions? Aura reading? And how will the world respond? Are the relationships strong enough to weather the storm? I’m sure the next chapters will provide me with at least a few more clues *turning the page in anticipation* :D