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for Say It with Flowers

by Sasunarufan13

person ARFleets
schedule February 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

OH MY GOD! My heart is racing with the end of this chapter, can't wait to see what you have in store for our boys next. 

person SParker
schedule February 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

For someone who doesn't know what they're doing, you're doing a good job. :-p

Plus you're successfully characterizing Teddy as a BABY, which some authors don't like to bother doing because it's ''oh so simple'' to just portray him as a teenager.

..and the buildup with Harry & Draco is nice.

person djaddict
schedule February 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

If I admit I did a little celebration dance at the breakup does that make me a bad person? TeeHee

Really loved this chapter so much even if we did have to endure a bit of Ginny on Valentines.

And since you asked for nitpicks (LOL) in the scene during the  Valentines date, you had Ginny sitting back in her "hair" instead of chair

person SParker
schedule February 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

about #3...

Very nice! ...and we are getting somewhere with their 'relationship' sorta

PS: why do I have to sign in to review....are they messing with the site...AGAIN???

person djaddict
schedule February 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

But no angst is gooooooood! Icky Ginny kiss though, sigh. *snickers*

person Anonymous
schedule January 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

about #2...

I never thought I'd ever say this but...I can't WAIT for you to update! This story is so relaxed & easy to read! No anticipation, no angst at the end...just good feelings all around. :-)

Okay enough feeding your ego.

person Anonymous
schedule January 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

oh and that was SP777 ...forgot my name

person Hestia
schedule January 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm enjoying getting this one even without the angst. Sometimes fluff is good. I can't wait to read how their relationship develops. 

person djaddict
schedule January 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Love this!

person Hestia
schedule January 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This sounds intriguing. I wonder what the specific flowers mean. I love your work. I'm still hoping for Harry/Dracos' point of view for Self-Fullfilling Prophecy.