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for Daydreams

by BitterWind

schedule July 8, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Pleaseeee finish this story 😭

person Leti001
schedule January 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

That was a really good chapter. It's nice to see Draco learning to trust Hermione and she is opening herself up to him

schedule January 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Well go on Hermione! First, you are simply brilliant and second, that's one way to move things forward. lol Thanks! HG4eva

person Anonymous
schedule January 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Well that escalated fast. I'm happy to see that draco is slowly changing and even Hermione. I can't wait to see where you take this story. I also love the potion that allows to see people's daydreams, their conscious desires. 

person MotekElm
schedule January 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wow. This just got really good. More please

person Leti001
schedule January 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yessss! I love this take charge but timid Hermione. And I love how she is subconsciously making Draco a better person and getting him back to being a regular student again without him even realizing. Loved the cupboard scene and hoping for more LEMONS! 

schedule January 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Well, that escalated quickly. lol I loved that she took charge and went for it. I wish I had that courage. :-) I am enjoying how out of his depth he is. Thank you! HG4eva

person Victoria
schedule January 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Interesting premise: a potion to allow seeing daydreams. I love it when authors come up with new applications or forms of magic as you have here. Looking forward to more of this story. 

person Naya
schedule January 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Highly intrigued by your story. I can't wait to see where you take this. Obviously both Hermione and Draco needd something. I just hope that Draco doesn't take advantage of Hermione. Also Lucius seems like he would cause trouble. Why would he be made a teacher? He doesn't seem to have changed. 

schedule January 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

An interesting and intriguing beginning... I have no idea how they let that, I will call him a man for the sake of being nice, near children or the potions with which to kill them all. He doesn't seem to have changed a whit! I know Draco is suffering and a very small part of me feels a tad sorry for him, but knowing his previous attitude and getting to see it now, I think he still has a lot of growing up to do before he becomes a decent human being. I say all that, but I am already all in with the story, as you write it beautifully and your descriptions are great! Thank you and I look forward to more soon! HG4eva