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by Alcoholic_Rootbeer

schedule June 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hello! Coming out of the shadows to say how much I'm enjoying this story. I usually hate Tuesdays, but I have this to look forward to now! 

Also, you made a comment about getting negative feedback on Draco. I just wanted to say that I'm finding your portrayal of him really refreshing. Flawed and arrogant and compassionate and caring. He's an actual adult male dealing with actual adult problems. I'm not sure what anyone else would complain about, but I like that he's conflicted about Astoria. While we all know that Dramione is the best, HE doesn't know that yet and having loyalty to Astoria, even while conflicted, is a very admirable and very human trait. 

Keep up the great work and see you next Tuesday! (...which is a terribly rude thing to say, but it made me laugh)

schedule June 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

There's no surprise that you had an award for this story, I'm loving it, and wait for the next chapter with excitement.  Looking forward to further reading xxx

schedule June 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Of course first I say thank you for the update. :-) Wonderful, as always. I am glad they've "taken a break", but that's not ending it. As much as I want Astoria to decide that she wants to not be with him, I don't want it to be that easy for him. He doesn't deserve easy and her ending it would put him in the clear. He needs to grow up and grow a set. I hope Hermione makes that clear to him; she's no one's second choice or fallback girl. I look forward to her talk with Ginny. :-) HG4eva

person MotekElm
schedule June 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

ah, sweet relief at the romance. now I'm on the edge of my seat until next Tuesday's update

person MotekElm
schedule June 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

yay! so close! great chapter. I can't  wait for next Tuesday's update

schedule May 31, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hee hee naughty sext nekid draco, that v is hard not to be looked at!!. Hermione you know draco cant go back to astoria, its all you!!. Let the sexy filthy loving begin already!!. Love the story by tje way im just a perv for good smutt!! Lol x

schedule May 31, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yaaay!!! They kissed, they kissed, they finally kissed! * insert happy dance in front of computer here *
And she walked in on him in the bath....really Granger, how did she not throw herself at him then and there!?!
MrBenzedrine, I love your fics, they're all excellent reads and this one is no exception!
Why did she have to leave though? Sorry, totally impatiently going to wait till next Tuesday!
Thanks for writing this fic
KS

schedule May 31, 2017 at 12:00 AM

What happened is reality is smacking the two of them around. lol No more trips to 'de Nile!' It's time to face the music and start acting like adults. I look forward to hearing sober Draco's thoughts on his actions, as that should prove as funny as all hell. lol Thanks again! HG4eva

person MotekElm
schedule May 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ron & Astoria are adorable, but I would really like some tango & horizontal tango time between Draco &Hermione now. Pleeeeeeeease!!!!

person Anon
schedule May 24, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Re: Chapter 18

You magnificent bastard.^_^