I don't know what to say since this is only five chapters, but the chapters are long. Very long. I love it. It's wonderful. I'm just waiting for the other trials to come. I know there will be. Please update soon.
It's really weird that I was dying for a story like this and here's a perfect one! Thank you for this. :) Excited to read more.
Love this!!!! Ack!
Perfect! cant wait for more.:)
Thanks for the update. It was a lovely Christmas for them. 👨👨👧👦
That was supposed to be 👨👨👦👦
Though somethings may be falling apart, it's good that they are still together, as friends, and family! Please update chapter 6 soon.
I wonder how Alden ever found out that Draco had that chateau in France, let alone where it was located.... Please update chapter 5 soon
YAS! Harry put Narcissa in her place! 🎉😆 and now Draco's going to devour him, lol, please update chapter 4 soon.
i like the story, but i think the last chapter was a bit of a let down. Harry, regardless, was wrong. Narcissa is a rightful grandmother and has a right to see her grandson. Harry slept with Draco and didnt tell him for YEARS. He only just LET HIM find out. Otherwise he would have denied Draco the chance to be a father, which is, no matter what, HUGELY selfish. Then to tell Narcissa, the boys rightful grandmother 'I will take the kids and you will never see them again' is rediculous. He already did that for 4 years. Although this harry is kind, and I see where he's going, he's completely wrong.
Draco could fight for custody and be granted it. Yes, sure, you can play the whole 'hes a big bad deatheater and they'd not give it to him' but in reality it would be more likely that card is played to allow the incorrect selfish harry plotline more than to play it because it would really happen. Draco, by getting custody, could then let HIS CHILD see HIS MOTHER. Which is HIS right, NOT Harry's.
Considering Harry is an orphan, he should WANT the kids to be around more family.
Frankly, I dont give a damn about Harry much in this story. He means well but everything is all about HIM and HIS KIDS and how HE SEES it being good for HIS KIDS. You have to obey HIS rules to see the kids-regardless that he never gave Draco the freaking chance-you have to agree to HIS terms if you want to be around the kids, and you have to agree to them IMMEDIATLY or he'll run?
Please.
I am sad to say that, though this is a sweet story, I cant get over how selfish he is in this. No matter how sweet he is with his kids, that attitude will affect and damage his kids, period. I like flawed characters in the story, and other than Draco calling Harry out on one thing, Harry has been basically treated an angel. He's anything but.
I hope you can find more readers to review this story other than I. I dont think it's a bad story, but I am quite tired of how 'everything my way with the kids or else no kids' Harry is. It's disgusting.
Thank you for the story, I must drop it.