Ch 16: oooh Ddore is in for it now. Love how you've re-interpreted the prophesy
Oh sure, just stop there!
But seriously, nice to see a new chapter, thanks for sharing.
And so the truth is out! 😈 ..... However we need a new name for Albus, somehow Dark Lord Albus doesn't sound scary at all.... Please update chapter 17 soon.
Dark, but very interesting. So he has to go through the darkness to find the balance and the light. They are both being forged in a variety of fires. accessories 5300
Love this chapter, and the kiss!
I find myself missing our little nitpick conversations, so just for fun...
In the third to the last paragraph I am pretty sure you wanted to use vicious not viscous.
And in the last paragraph, blinded, not blinding. :)
Wow, that was, hmmmm. wow!
Oh, can't wait to see what's Harry new power, please update chapter 15 soon.
Holly shit that was hot !!!!!!!! man I can't wait to see what harry is going to do to all of them.....hope it's bloody !!!!!! Thanks for this !!:):):)
OH YES PLEASE XD Can't wait for more!!!
Lol, sorry you got the wrong person, I was a bit confuse when I saw you note to Jan, which is me: "Jan - The toad does not figure in here… Not important to the story… but I hope you read on." I was wondering if maybe I accidentally typed the wrong letter and self correction chose toad or something like that lol, but it was CDGaymer that made the toad comment. But worry not, I am loving this story, so please update chapter 13 and more 😄