You're building a very nice story. Do you by chance look why some of the chapters don't stay within the borders, chapters 3, 8, 12, 13, 14?
Every couple hours I come back hoping to see the next chapter. Keep up the good work. Though if you haven't I think it was chapter 11 that needs some fixing. Mainly you restarted the chapter half way through.
Absolutely loving this story and how fast the chapters are coming! It's great given I am on break right now. I can't wait to read more. Will Hermione be joining Harry in his lessons? It seems like she would enjoy them as it would give her an insight into the "pureblood" world or at least more into how the wizarding world works. That would help her help Harry (since they were both raised as muggles) figure out things that need to change to help muggleborns integrate better, and between her and Harry, they could introduce Draco to some muggle concepts that could result in him having insight on how to help purebloods.
I can't wait to read more!
I really like what you've written and I'm impatiently waiting for more. The only thing I think would be better is if Harry was a bit older. I think he's about 15. I can't wait to read more. I ask again that you don't stop writing this or carry on for years with an update every 6 months or so. What kind of classes are you taking and what's your major?
Hestia
I don't think the story is slow. You have to build the "word" so we can picture it. I think you are doing a great job. Does Dumbledore know Harry has the elder wand? If you hadn't built the background and just jumped to Hogwartzs it would've felt like you rushed the story. If you do get negative comments just remember there are those of us who like it and you will never please everyone. Thanks for the Christmas Eve update. Merry Christmas!
Hestia
I have been enjoying this story! I'm glad that he can still count on Hermione. In most fics, she goes down with Ron/The Weasleys! Looking forward to your next update!!
this is so good I am looking forward to more
poor Harry now he has a lot of papers to go through hopefully Draco and hernine decide to help. Still loving it
I think you are off to a good start. Did dear old Dumbles steal all of Harry's money? I hope Harry doesn't follow Voldemort. I hope you can finish before you start your classes, I'd hate for you not to finish or to keep writing it for years. It's really annoying when someone writes a story your interested in only to update once a year. I do realize your classes are much more important so don't blow them off for anything, your education must come first. Well now that I've babbled, I just wanted to tell you I like what you've written so far.
Wow this is the kind of story that I like direct to the point , chapters are small but still enjoy them. Thanks. Just please dont do like so many authors that have tons of unfinished stories going on.