I love this angsty, romantic story! I hope you have a nasty fate planned for Ginny. She makes a fine villain.
Please keep writing!
This is an original idea for a story; a particularly surprising role for Hermione. I'm intrigued to read more...
I'm probably a bit odd, but I found the kiss the hottest part of that chapter.....
"A good witch does not masturbate to the fantasy of a Malfoy."
Heh, he. Well, I'm not a good witch...
I think he knew it was Hermione all along.
Hmm, what is going on with Ginny and George?
Eww! Ginny is foul.africam
Good for the most part but I'd stop using the word boyfriend, the way she uses it sounds childish and she suddenly seems like a clingy starry eyed girlfriend.
Love it, keep going!
Pretty good! I don't usually read first person stories anymore but I sure will be reading yours~