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for Bonded Consort

by Lomonaaeren

person SParker
schedule June 14, 2017 at 12:00 AM

about #24....

All I can do is...give TWO thumbs up for this chapter.

person Jan
schedule June 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Is it bad that in a way I kind of feel bad for James? Please update chapter 25 soon 😆

schedule June 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yes! So glad to see another chapter of this! I was waiting.

Love Draco and Sirius standing up for Harry, but, more importantly, Harry standing up for himself. It's hard to trust James even now, thought I think he's sincere and Harry is too disillusioned at this point to be sucked into any potential games anyway. I do wonder what Lily is doing and thinking right now. Will we get a glimpse of that, perchance?

schedule June 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Loved the little nod to Robin Hood in this (and our delicious Sheriff of Nottingham wanting to cut someone's heart out with a spoon). Good for Harry not forgiving his family, jerks! I liked the Black ancestor, she was ace! SP

person SParker
schedule May 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

about #23...

For a second I thought what Harry was walking into was similar to ....the Veil at the MInistry.

schedule May 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Just read up to the end of ch 22 in one go - I am so angry! Not at you, but at the Potters and Dumbledore. So, good job there making me care so much about Harry and Draco. And the newspaper report was just perfect: such lovely innuendo and insinuation in it - Rita Skeeter would have been proud (is that an insult? Cos I don't mean it as one).

And I'm still waiting for the promised blankets to appear! ;) SP

schedule May 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

beautiful, awesome, tender, amazing,......

schedule May 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Lovely chapter!!! I loved it!!! 

person Jan
schedule April 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Is it so wrong that I actually wished Draco had verbally tear Dahlia up to shreds? Or that I really wished that Harry's magic had also slapped Dahlia? I truly hate her character, so weak minded, and desperate that she relies solely on her magical abilities to get people to notice and like her, that's just weak and pathetic! Please update chapter 22 soon.

schedule April 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Thank God! I was really worried that Harry was going to lose Draco, at least temporarily. I'm glad he was able to resist.

Why are the Light wizards not more freaked out by Dahlia by now? She's A LOT more dangerous than Harry, considering she basically has the power of mind control.