I didn't find the POV change jarring at all, you truly captured Rons anguish I think over being so helpless in such a situation. I hope the next chapter has Hermiones experience, I'd love to see her going toe-to-toe with Greyback.
Poor Harry and Remus, they just can't seem to catch a break. I'm so curious to see where this goes because I just don't know how Harry can forgive him in this instance but I felt that way in the last book too. You write so well I know you won't have them just fall all over each other, I really am looking forward to how it pans out,
Can't wait for your next update, Nina :)
Remus you jerk! Part of me can understand Remus, but a bigger part of me is just raging against him for hurting Harry. Seriously someone needs to beat some sense into him. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Wow!!!
What is Remus thinking???
what is now happening to Harry?
Please update soon
Cliffhanger nooo! My only weakness!
A brilliant start to your next story and I can't wait to read more, RemusxHarry is a wonderful pairing if done correctly and your take on them is just so perfect and so true to their personalities I honestly love it. I don't know if I'll be able to stay away and read it all in one go like I did with Half Moon, I'll eagerly be checking in every Tuesday for your updates,
Nina
Oh man! I really hope Harry really gives it to Remus! Can't wait for the next chapter!
love the drama. Keep going!
Remus, you idiot, You didn't wait and listen to the whole of Harry's feelings - the upcoming sense of abadonment and now you have done just that.
Now what will Harry do?
Love it, so happy this story continues. Hope you update soon.