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for Moments in Love

by Gandalfs-Beard

person HellThor
schedule January 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Its been a month now i read your fic,and each chapt i enjoy.Big thx for your amazing work and continue plz ;)

person Anon
schedule January 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Thanks for the, as I said, 'civil discourse'. The story to which you refer was actually somewhat of a 'stealth parody', inspired by a site I found a long long time ago in the bowels of the internet, one seemingly devoted to the rather ludicrous hentai convention of girls or women being raped and seemingly being no worse for wear afterwards. Obviously, that does not happen, even in a best-case scenario. Rape is the penultimate violation of self, and I personally feel that rapists should be executed by crucifixion. And though you only have my word for this, the snafu with not having a Rape descriptor in it was an honest oversight when I posted it.  And in fact, it had been so long I almost forgot about it.

Thinking about it, I believe part of the 'problem' such as it is I'm having with the story is that I recently reread the HP series, and thus those characterizations are stronger in my memory than they would usually be.  But please, even though our viewpoints differ, don't for one second think I'm casting aspersions on your writing ability.  I may not agree with the direction or characterization, but I have begun to enjoy the story immensely.  The Umbridge sub-plot in particular is quite intriguing(at least I've never seen anything like it), and has made me hate her even more. Congratulations.^_^

Oh, and you might want to go read a little story I just posted today. It's dumb, but I think you might like it.

person Anon
schedule January 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is an...odd story, but intriguing. How long will it run? Through seventh year?

(deleted and reposted review -- twice -- for typos arrrgh)

person Anonymous
schedule January 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Please keep writing

i really enjoy your writing, I had a lot to say about your story so far but it boils down to 

"I've paid good money for much less of a story"

thanks

person Anon
schedule December 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I appreciate your responding to my reviews, but I really wish you had a discussion topic on the forum; anything I'd want to say would be both A, too long for a review space, and B, fairly pointless, since you and I are obviously diametrically opposed in how we view the characters. That being said, there's something to be said for civil discourse, eh?^_^

person Malingerer
schedule December 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM

In The Marvelous Land of Oz, there is a boy named Tip who turns out to be the girl Ozma, who had been turned into a boy to hide her identity.

Harry is a boy who will be able to change into a girl, and presumably that part of the Oz stories intrigued him in some fashion when he first read them. The story would probably resonate with him in new ways, now, since he and Ozma are both children who were hidden away as babies, with magic used to hide their whereabouts.

Congrats on writing an engaging and entertaining story. Thank you.

person Knightblazer
schedule December 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Well done nice surprise christmas eve chapter.

person Kokkinosman9
schedule December 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Really enjoying the story and hope you have a great Christmas :3 don't over do it forcing out the next chapters and remember to enjoy yourself <3

schedule December 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

i just have one question is this going to be the same number of chapters you've indecated on other sites?

person Anon
schedule December 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Ah, thus just keeps getting funnier. I eagerly await Umbridge killing Voldemort or Harry devising a way to counter AK or something else.^_^