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for Moments in Love

by Gandalfs-Beard

schedule April 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'm loving this storyline and I'm glad your so quick to add new chapters. I made an account just to say Good work and keep it up, you have real talent.

person Al_G
schedule March 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I am really enjoing this story! 

Wile reading I had a couple of questions pop up.

1 With how powerful Harry and Hermione's Patroni are could they cure Neville's parents?

2 I figured that after Narcissa's divorce she would have reconciled with Andromeda. Mr and Mrs Tonks are portrayed as good people in the books. Will we see a happy Black family reunion?

Thank you for writing this!

person Meltyman
schedule March 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Keep up the great writing please. I really enjoyed Furry Little Problem and look forward seeing how you present the city fight at the end of this story.  

I like the fact that you have made an effort to maintain the personalities and behaviors of the original characters and have added believable new characters to your stories.

 

I look forward to the next installments.

schedule March 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh wow you have got to continue this story, It would be a shame to miss out on it after I spent so long ad many days reading it all.

person HPreader
schedule February 25, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hi,

 

i have been reading your story, and I love it. Please tell me you are still writing it and that the next chapter will be along soon. 

 

I love the story. 

 

John

person bodsquad
schedule February 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is the first i have commented but this made me chuckle.

[Harry narrowed his eyes at the Carrows and nodded. “Oh yeah... I’d forgotten all about that. Did I ever mention you have a brilliant memory?”

“Only about a million times Harry,” said Hermione. She blushed, temporarily distracted from her crossness by Harry’s compliment.]


Wouldn't it have been really funny for Hermione to have answered with an exact number such as "Only 378 times Harry" with of course a smirk. being that she has a "brilliant memory" and all.

Well done on this brilliant story. So far.

schedule February 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Good on you, Neville. I always thought that Dumbledore's Army was a silly name anyway.

Can hardly wait for more!

schedule February 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Had to reread from the beginning in order to remember the differences to HFLP. Enjoyed it just as much as I did the first time. Sigh, now it's down to waiting for updates. 

Keep up the good work!

person abthomas
schedule February 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I just basically gulped this story in an all nighter; I am going to have to re-read the last couple of chapters as my brain was a bit fuzzy at the end. Off to get some coffee. Early await the next update.

person rattdv
schedule February 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

The best Harmony fic I've ever read to date.  I absolutely love how you how found a way to incorporate a muggle into Hogwarts.