Please write more! I want them to find their happy ever after. I love this story.
Please, please, please continue!!!
Oh I love it. That was written beautifully. I could go with it, just the way it is. She obviously broke the curse.
If you wanted to add, make it an epilogue. But really who cares, obviously she broke the curse, they could fall in love or not, the ghosts found peace. Maybe Amelia could get better and not die...
All in all, I loved it. Thank you for sharing your story to us.
I think you should continue. :-) They are lovely together, but not in love yet. I hope the sisters still suffer after the curse is lifted, though. lol Thank you!!
Oh that was good! That grandmother was a real biatch! I hope Amelia is well enough to at least see that the curse lift. Kudos on that little nugget of a plot twist...Hermione being the heir. Brilliant!
What a lovely, if awkward, date. lol I am glad she asked him and very glad she has Luna. I am sorry Amelia is not doing well, but I have hope she will at least get to see the curse cured before she passes. On to the next chapter (YAY!). Thank you!
Severus scaring her all the time cracks me up, but I hope he doesn't get hurt by mistake. lol I don't know if there is an heir out there, but I hope Severus and Hermione "cure" it way before we find out. :-) I look forward to more and thank you!! HG4eva
I think you did a great job at the curse's background and telling their story. I was totally in it and felt horrible for Marek. Severus' last line made me smile, though. Since it will hopefully be her and him lifting it. :-) Thanks! HG4eva
I like the new name :). I like this story, it is much "softer" around the edges but also easy to read. While Stuck By Law and Insanity Check! (my favorite from you in SS/HG section) have a kind of heavy gloomy air around them, this one is more like Stormy Encounters easy but compels you to read it :)
“He was the last of his line” Severus answered with a shrug “If there is a curse than we’ll have to lift it ourselves...” His face turned slightly red “We as in the Prince line and not you and...me” - briliant, made me laugh :) I love the background story for the curse.
I enjoy all your stories, an this one is no exception. Can't wait for more!