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schedule January 1, 2025 at 12:00 AM

A great and very different story, thank you for taking me on this journey :-)

I was so excited and love happy endings.

Please keep on writing such great stories and 1000 thanks!

person LDeetz
schedule June 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'd love to read a sequel to this! Maybe Luna breaks out? Maybe there's an unknown assailant? I'm sure whatever you write will be amazing! Please keep up the good work!

person pickles87
schedule January 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great story... could we please have a small epilogue with the ghosts.....     You've left it open to having a 2nd book in the series of Luna's break out from the mental institution....

schedule January 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Thank you for sharing that story with us! It was beautifully written and captivating from start to finish. Brava! HG4eva

person des
schedule January 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

love this story, would really like a sequal.

person Boxieboo
schedule January 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I found you story today and read all your chapters this evening. I couldn't stop reading, just beautiful. Thankyou

schedule December 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I adore your Neville! I ache for Luna I am glad Hermione and Severus are finally past their own horrors and have one another. And, I am thrilled you are updating. :-) Thank you and Happy Holidays!

person MzPearlz
schedule December 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hi there! You're story's pretty good but somehow your font and set up has went down hill with the last theee chapters. And fighting to read over the brown background is shit. Sk I skimmed xD sorry.. but if you could, set your paragraphs back to what you hd in the beginning x3 thanks!

person Mary
schedule December 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM

So sad that Luna is so out of it.  Very interesting closet the one that Neville has and I'm glad Severus finally can be okay with their friendship -Hermione and Neville's- as she needs all the support and love that she can get. 

Thank you for sharing!

schedule December 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I am sorry your Word was messed up. But, I had no issues reading it. :-)  I am sorry he feels so jealous and I wish he would talk to her about his fears. But, I also think she should have handled things the first time with a bit more mature reaction. Of course, she is still young. :-) Thanks!! HG4eva