Uhhh... do you hate Christianity? Cuz wtf was this ending? I mean the story was pretty good well written and it makes a lot of sense you saying you got inspired while marathoning SVU.
Anyway I hope you don't think Christianity is like this, rather what a proper interpretation of the Bible should be. Idk I felt sick reading about such a perverted Christianity and Christian views.
foe what this story was (which I thought it'd be a twisted fucked up jerk fest)
thx ;)
not going to lie. Scrolled through the religious bs. All of it. So like mostly the entire last chapter. Got bored to tears. Would have loved more about actions from his Daphne Tracy take over until the end but figured you got bored by your own story and just gave up.
Not terrible... but you need a beta to cut out the tangents..