Chapter 20.
OHH FUCK!! Complications are welcomed, but why Snape must always be turned into a blood-leaking pancake?
I'm all nervous now. The tension is rising. I love this story.
And I feel a little sorry for Draco, he's an evil little shit and he tried to rape Hermione, but then again he's desperate. I think if he was truly vicious he would have done it a long before. Maybe I'm wrong, but I think he runs out of options.
Fox xx
Chapter 21.
Did I say I was nervous before? Well, I'm really worried now.
Poor Severus, that must have been a shock to see her at the door... Poor Hermione, will you force her to have sex with all the Death Eaters? I know it was "her decision", but I still hope you will find a way out. Right?
Also did she use Histomalleus before she arrived? Please say yes. Ohh you know how to raise hysteria levels in your readers.
Fox xx
Chapter 22.
I was hoping you'd do something about it. You never disappoint :) But the shagging party is not over and I'm very curious about the plan. Hermione is too clever not to have one.
Ok, so I know it's too late now, but I would of course prefer fly on the wall or Lucius POV.
I must go now and read more.
Fox xx
DS,
Yes certain punishments are my kind of thing ;-) It's good to hear from you. I was away from you for 24 days during which you have written 10 chapters. I have no idea how you do it, but following you is a pleasure.
Chapter 23.
Bella is a bit freaky, luckily sexy Lu didn't let her have Hermione brrr... and I hate when she says Sevvy -it's an infuriating abbreviation. I disagree, that Severus is severe, I think it is a very sensual name, to me it sounds like a gentle, passionate sigh. Maybe it's just me, but this is how I see it.
Lucius is clearly beautiful and sexy, I wouldn't kick him out of my bed, but he's also sooo full of himself. When I watch him (read him), in the background I hear Beyonce's "Ego" I would let him fuck me, only if I had ear pluggs to cut out the bullshit (gagging -no good, tongue -essential).
I looove the cock envy -very, very funny. In fact all Hermione's internal comments are hilarious.
I hope Sexy Lu will not develop some kind of obsession over Hermione, he seems to have too much interest in her (for a Mudblood)... a pinch of fascination + a shot of excitement + pint of humiliation and pain and we have a very dangerous, explosive even, mixture... yes?
And, because I'm yours -I've melted, I am a wet puddle... wet...
Thank you
Fox xx
I can't believe you got this out so fast. You're a freakin speed demon. I liked your multi-POV. I think maybe I liked Sev's best (which was my original inclination for voting, but I needed to know what was going on in the room, so I went with my nosier side). I'm totally impressed with Hermione's plan (and she WAS being sneaky on the bed!), and I loved how Lucius almost sniffed it out.
But obviously my favorite bit was the last line. Holy fuck! If you could have seen me gasping and clapping as I read it, you would know, without a doubt, just how utterly insane I really am.
Are they really going to be allowed to go back to Hogwarts now? How the fuck are you going to wrap this up? Is Voldie going to die? No don't tell me! I was only thinking out loud. I'll wait patiently for the the next chapter ;)
I'M SORRY!!! I didn't abandoned you, really. I was crazy busy and then away for Christmas and New Year and now I'm back. I know I'm a very bad Fox, but I will make my shameful behaviour up to you, I promise.
Chapter 14.
I love the opening line with the sausage sandwich -it makes me hungry.
I like how Severus starts to consider her moods and worries and over-thinks the situation. Also how he's watching her back in classes and in corridors. Is he following her? I'm glad she showed him, that she wants him and smirk-hiding is one of my favourite games.
BUT the highlight of the chapter is Lucius the Pussy Hound his ability is astounding! On a top of that he is so sexy... and this lovely hair... yum. I have a feeling he is going to be a little problem (or a big problem). Not, that it's a bad thing, really. Can't wait :-)
Fox xx
Chapter 15.
Very sexy. Appearing at my lover's door in just a coat and underwear is still on my "to do" list... one day... one day. The whole chapter was amazing, I loved how their relationship evolved. There's one thing I don't understand though, why do they have to do it only once a week, I mean, he needs to satisfy the enchantment by having unprotected sex with one muggle a week -as a minimum, in my understanding... so they could, perhaps, meet up more often??? Or am I just greedy...?
I really liked:
A lint repository -very funny
Clinging to him like a sloth -very sweet, I can see it in my mind :-)
And they fell asleep together. Again very sweet and lovely.
Fox xx
Fly on the wall!! Oh mug gah, can't wait to see what you come up with, haha. Give 'em hell, Hermione!
Oh...don't give me choices. I'll have to sit on the fence and let you decide as the creator. I mean I do have a soft spot for Lucius as explained before.........but I am in a relaxed state as I am having a spa day with my daughter tomorrow and am full of zen. Hell no......go for it Lu and let Hermione unleash the dogs of war. I have a golden retriever puppy called Saffie and she is a brute and willing to participate in kicking Death Eater arses. Only kidding.... she is a sweetheart and totally submissive.But as usual I digress. Interestingly enough our puppy's mother was called Bella....think she may be related to Bellatrix? Still very intrigued as to what Hermione is planning. Great stuff as always. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.
Chapter 16.
Love the chapter, especially how his research notes and McGonagall's remarks on young Severus draw a parallel between his and Hermione's life. So it seems they are more alike than I previously thought.
Ahh... and yesss... a guilt fertilier in action, she'd better go and kiss every square inch of his body, that should make her feel better ;)
I hope that a sexy Loose-use Malfoy will appear soon.
Fox xx