Two chapters too good for words so I'll draw you a picture instead. No indeed not my little clootie dumpling I draw worse than I write. How clever of her to hide and administer the contraceptive potion. Very " Orange is the New Black". Hope Lucius is not out of action too long though I must admit he is a bit of a nasty bastard and it was interesting that Hermione noticed his good looks....yum yum...buy me one of them Mummy. I agree that Severus has an incerdibly sensual mouth....sort of what drew me to AR in the first place. Scenario...My sister......OMG.....have you seen Kevin Costner in RHPOT?
Me.......sod Kevin Costner. Who was the guy playing the sherrif?
and so started a (healthy?) obsession.
All I can say is that like the ambassador plying us with Ferrerro Rocher..you are really spoiling us.
Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
Yeeeeeeees! So good. Steamy sweetness, like a scalding cup of hot chocolate. Mmmmmmm. Perfect.
Favs and fixes:
(He glared at Dumbledore whose tired features--Comma after Dumbledore.)
And she’d saved him . . . again. As she did every week.--Yes. Love this.
her final words had slain him--Unh! The feels. And the word slain made me love the sentence.
It was like having a demanding toddler on his chest. But he figured she’d earned herself the right to be as childish and grumpy as she liked. And it happened to make him smile.--This is too sweet. And hilarious.
It felt tenuous and potentially transient--Excellent.
And as she watched his sensuous lips fold around her clitoris--Holy fuck, yes!
(Withdrawing his fingers from her, he made to sit up before he could move, she grabbed him by the shoulders--You need a "but" before before.(Good lord, this is the most insane sounding fix.)
Severus sat up to regard her with dark, intense eyes. “Of course. You’re mine.”--And now I'm dead, flopping around on the floor like a flounder in all the feels.
Loved the latest chapter! So glad to see them coming around to their feeling for each other. And how sweet of Severus to take care of Hermione when he wasnt able to play too
Got damn Mione!
I love the way you've protraed Hermione it's brilliant and her character development is just amazing!
I love it keep updating chapters cuz your story is amazing!
"Because I'm yours." Swoooooooon. So glad for how it turned out *loopy heart eyes*
"Because I,m yours" OMG So cute... It was great but the girl inside me it,s just glad this part it,s over in order to watch them cuddle and kiss in front of the chimney. Although I imagine there will be other dilemmas to solve otherwise, it would mean that the story is next to its end and nobody wants that.
Let me know how you go with it. - for now it goes good, working on two stories helps (tho my dishes would suggest otherwise)
Possessive Snape returns! - no complaints here, we love possessive Snape ;)
Happy Christmas to you. And ‘no’, do not send your muse to me. - thank you :) and ouch, yeah you writing much faster than usual, this insane creature of mine is gone haywire, making me go back and forth between the stories :/
Chapter in overall is FANTASTIC! I am bit confused tho, where did she had that contraceptive while she was with Snape...only thing that comes to mind is when she hid herself under the covers...
stuffing Lucius’ balls into his filthy, privileged mouth. - ok, I love how descriptive and graphical you are, also I love all the depth that this "little" description carry with it
Even a compliant person wouldn’t put up with that sort of shit. - hahahahahahahaha
Only a man with cock envy would say that. - totally, totally evil *grin around the head*
Poor SEv, doing the math....and pacing :(
She was one of the bravest people he’d ever known. - I know you captured him well, but, it always hurts to remember how oblivious he is towards himself and his own actions.
Severus was first inside the room. - awwwwwwwwww
“Because . . . I’m . . . yours.” - I just love this part <3
Waiting for the next chapter, and hopefully it will be something to shoot ours (readers) ripped nerves. XX
Chapter 17 is by far my favorite chapter to date. There's just something so freaking hot about the situation. I've re read it so many times. :)
Chapter 18.
The masturbation scene was reminiscent of my past as a teenager... Ohh I'm such a sentimentalsod... :) of course I never had any one watching me - as far as I know.
Severus and Hermione in this chapter were beautiful together. He was very open and honest with himself about his feelings on their relationship. Those feelings, wishes and expectations he has for his future... so sad...
Is it really too much to wish, the poor guy got some happiness in his life for once?
I don't think so, but I suppose it will be a while.
Fox xx
Chapter 19.
That was exciting! I knew Draco will make an appearance at some point :)
And then our dark, dangerous and big-cocked hero managed to save her in the last moment -for the time being, at least.
And "pussy howling for relief" was so funny, I get that a lot, but then it's less funny, of course.
Fox xx