OMG The title of chapter 29 freaked me out. I can manage waiting a little longer between chapters if you need to rest but please, don,t end the story yet.
Zomg!!!!!!! I tried to read it slowly but it's tooooooo addicting!!!!!!
oh my gosh!! my mouth was gaping open, I didn't see it coming at all haha. hoping for some backstory on how it all came to that moment... :)
You sneaky sneaky biotch. You made me think the sacrifice had to be a muggleborn witch. I had to go back and check the other chatper (because I obviously thought I was nuts).But Snape never confirms her accusation. Tricky tricky tricky.
I am still dying to know what happens next. Where is Hermione? How did Dumbledore wind up on the slab? What's going to happen to Voldemort? Bahhhhhh! Don't answer any of that. (BTW, I can see what this is fucking with your head.)
My only real question is how did he not see . . . oh, fuck me. Never mind. I think I just figured it out. Damn you and your trickiness!
I step outside house and there is a new chapter, I went berserk until I could get back home and read the chapter on big screen!
you are protective of your Severus aren’t you? - always ;)
I think that’s why these chapters have been so rough - this story is nerve wracking, I'll admit that but it is a good one :D
He is a much gentler soul than he has been in my past fics. - I'll take this as personal compliment XD, ppl around me usually debate do I have soul at all or where is it hidden :D
Perhaps she considered his failure to disclose the truth a betrayal? - perhaps, but (and, yeah still protective ;) ) it is still unrealistic from someone like him to just "spill his guts" on her whim, isn't it? Telling her, after how she reacted, is his only mistake.
and it’s that conflict that is driving her decision-making - one thing that smart people know - never make decisions when conflicted or in emotional turmoil, those are usually very bad decisions.
Take your insane creature back! - tnx, and yeah - she's back >.<...well, be careful what you wish for....
He stopped. Books. Everywhere. A nearly empty bottle of whisky discarded in the middle. Fuck. / He rolled his hand as though encouraging the bleeding obvious. - yeah :'(
Vulnera Sanentur - ok now I'm nitpicking but...that is a counter spell that works ONLY on Sectumsempra, created specifically to heal wound created with Sectumsempra ;)
The dagger’s vampiric properties had taken their toll. - vampiric? Don't tell me you'll go there pls! And question - why the hell he didn't took out the dagger?
Dumbledore?! - ???
For the rest...all I can say is either too personal to share or I just lack the proper words.
Just give us next chapter soon, please :(
Noooooo! And in top of that, such a short chapter. I can't wait for more.
Re: Chapter 29
Well, I certainly didn't see that coming.O_O
DS,
I don't know what to say now. I cried. I really cried. I very rarely cry -partially, because I try to avoid things that make me cry... It was so tragic, that I am almost glad the chapter was short... poor Severus, poor Hermione... even poor Draco... maybe that will turn him away from Voldie? He's really still a child, I suppose he doesn't have much choice, having Lucius as a father...
I can't imagine the extend of his grief right now. I think I would prefer to die, than to live with so much guilt and pain.
Harry must have had the shock of his life when Severus called him by his given name AND said 'thank you', I can imagine all the talk in Gryffindor common room now.
What made you do it? Was it the influence of yesterday's Blue Monday? Call me deluded, but I still believe you can fix it. It's a world of magic in the end, isn't it? And I have to admit that: "Dumbledore?!" gave me a new shot of hope. Pleeeease fix it.
I will say hello to London from you IF you fix it. Only then. That's my last word.
Fox xx
OMG......Mentioned in despatches but like Wayne......I am not worthy. Especially as it comes from being in a pub at closing time and panicking that they will stop serving booze!
And....OMG...Did that really happen? DD...after I have maligned him and called him everything under the sun...do a Sidney Carton and sacrifice himself...for t' greater good?
Oh wow, Dessie, powerful stuff and seriously did not see that coming.
Magnificent story and plot line...but where is Hermione?
Best wishes, Love...a very chuffed...Ali xxxx.
Well it's always said it has to get worse before it gets better.......and we have reached that turning point now.....yes!.......haven't we? So is it Lucky Lucie or Desperate Draco she's contacting....or neither? Beautifully written as always my dear and you have even introduced me to a thoroughly likeable, lesbian Parvati. Trying to organise an afternoon tea in the ballroom at the Blackpool Tower ( about 50 miles away) and it is proving to be very popular. Will send you some cakes and sarnies if we get there.
Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.