Whoops Hermione....Busted! And does he sound pissed off or what? But you know if he manned up a bit and gave her a thorough good snogging followed by the rogering of her life, they might learn to get along a lot better. I understand her conflict in that she sees her enjoyment during the "act" as some sort of personal betrayal of her ideals and morals especially as there is a war going on. In my opinion however she should accept it as a perk of the job. No doubt easier said than done as there didn't appear to have been any sort of attraction before they had to engage in this manner. On a serious note your prose and writing style is brilliant. And so from a balmy, tropical, unseasonably warm (albeit wet) 13C in Lancashire..... Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
Oooooooo, Snape's gonna be mad. (Or more likely hurt--setting back their growth and stabbing a huge spike through their cautious camaraderie.)
I enjoyed the change of pace with the spin the bottle scene. Everything has been so heavy and life-or-death. But this was more innocent--just a bit of light hormone-driven teenage fun.
But jeez, what a contrast to Snape's life. He's risking his life (and balls) to keep Harry alive, and Harry's safe and warm back in his common room playing spin the bottle (with Snape's lifeline no less). What a head fuck.
Fav bits (besides Snape's)
"malaise of rotting guilt "
"before delivering what looked like a saliva transfusion"--Bahahahaha!
Ooooooh... someone got better quick. Hm... bet Harry feels just a light bit disappointed now x3 looks like someone else is out for our bookworm xD
DS,
Chapter 12.
So our lovely Caring Hermione morphed into Stubborn Hermione, plagued by horrible dreams. Dreams, which seem to circle primarily around her guilt. She turns stubborn just when Snape gets badly hurt, I can only imagine what an amazing guilt fertiliser that will be...
I hate it, when Snape gets hurt. I'm displeased.
I think, you do it on purpose, you gave me (ok us) a chapter, not only with as little info as possible, but also with a painful cliffie! All the info in this chapter is pretended! Most questions unanswered! You are a merciless tease.
And Sna-ape is jea-lous... hahahaha
Ohh and Drake is right, good cock is a cure for almost anything, especially headache, I know, I tried.
Waiting for more.
Fox xx
I need to return her to you soon. - 2 more days and my work is done, I will more than welcome her return ;)
Wow, I love your reviews but I don’t want them to take up so much of your time. - Don't worry, it usually takes me just a couple of minutes, but the last one - I was working, so I'd write sentence, then return to the part of my report I was mulling about so it took me longer, much, much longer than usual. But I'm glad that you are not bored with my essays, ups reviews :D Each time I plan to leave just a short note and end up with leaving you War and Peace.
Are you referring to my other fics? - Ooooo yesssss :D I meant it more as a joke ;) - I love your "water" scenes ;)
He’s damaged goods, no matter what front he adopts, it’s always there. - I know, and I feel awful for saying this but...would we all loved him so much if he isn't damaged goods?
This time I'll try to keep it short.
I admire the mastery you used to explain such a simple yet so complex notion as falling in love or enjoy in things that go against reason. And ofc she had to degrade to emotional turmoil, teenagers >.< When I read that letter of hers, I could smash mymonitor :S
And then, there is he - all banged up and broken. I nearly started to cry :'(
Spin the bottle game, I won't even comment XD But Snape showing up when she had to kiss Harry - you are devious! Are you trying to destroy him completely? Evil!!!
“Miss Granger. I believe we had an . . . appointment?” - the scales are tipping again, will we have now her expecting the orgasm and him refusing to provide one?
This chapter was true emotional rollercoaster, I truly hope you have another chapter ready and that you are going to put us (well, me) out of misery soon. Chewing my nails now XD
Until the next chapter XX
Ahh cliffhanger!! What is next for these too? Love your writing style, can't wait for more.
Yaaaaaaayyy!!! She's not being so terribly mean anymore xD this is going to be a long review..
alright, so when I was younger I tried to write some fanfics myself, felt that I sucked at it, and quit xD then my roommate and best friend of lile 8 years, starts bugging me a year or two ago about writing her some FanFiction specifically. I'll say sure... and write two sentences to a paragraph or more and then stop xD and she would still ask and guilt me on not writing the fanfic for her xD. But what I mean by all rhe he's and she's is that I haven't named a character nor said anything about any personal affects, like his long hair or her purple eyes xD and so i graze through the story and most of my sentences start off with he or she, which aggravates me cause... I want it more creative, like for instance, your stories and such! But! All is well x3
I'm thinking Sev was faking it so he would have to worry ahoit her freaking out and running away again but maybe he wasn't xD I wonder what Ron and Harry would say about her sexual questions xD
-laughs maniacally- that's fucked up xD maybe he should have went to the american girl anyway? Wonder how Hermione will feel about this xD (Shit, I'd feel a bit awesome, though I hope he doesn't turn resentful...)
Sev, dressed up, is delish. I always figure him to be pretty lean, can't be slipping into cracks and crevices to spy like he does(or at least, how I think) xD
Attatcheddd... woop! Least no unnecessary pain, yea? Now thinking back on it, my feelings would be hella hurt if I couldn't get whoever I was having sex with hard -nervous laugh- hahaa.. yup.
I love the story so far. What is next for our duo? What about Drake?