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for Doing it for the Order *Complete*

by Desert_Sea

person aliciana
schedule January 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

OMG......and Happy New Year to you. I can't keep up with you review wise but I have kept up reading and I am aghast!!!!! She gives him a nice blow job...then get attacked by Draco and now she's sacrificing herself to the Death Eater wolf pack in "order" to keep him safe. Too much excitement for this lass to take but I'll do my best. Lovely, lovely work and thank you so much for these quick updates. Best wishes for 2017 and still loving this story. We have beautiful calm frosty weather here at the moment and going to Coniston tomorrow in the Lake District to check on my boat and caravan.

Best wishes, love Ali xxxxx.  

schedule January 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ooooooooo! So much cliffhangy goodness. I'm dying to know how they're going to handle this. Wandless magic? If he casts an unnociteable Histomaleus on her, he can just act like he's never had sex with her before. (Juicy panties can be explained away.) Did I understand Lucius's reasoning correctly--that she needs to be fucked multiple times to prove there's no contraception involved? What, by all of them? That's gonna be a long night. I hope she lubed herself up real good when she was "stretching" before the meet.

Oh and I loved the scene between her and Parvati. A little bit hilarious, a little bit sexy, a little bit girl talk. A bit of lighthearted fun before the fish slap of rape is upon us. Excellent contrast. :)

person I,m loving it
schedule January 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ok, so I think a leave of abscence from work is completely justified at this point...haha Of course we understand things slowing down but please, don,t make us suffer for too long! Great work!

person Anon
schedule January 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Re: Chapter 21

As Good Ol' J.R. would say, "Business is about to pick up!"

person I,m loving it
schedule December 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I have never reviewed anything except for a Sheinside scarf but I felt the need to thank you for this story. It has been my particular oasis while studying for a very important exam. I love that you put an effort in developing a story rather than just intercalating smut scenes. And the credibility of the sex scenes are much appreciated.

 I found myself grinning at the screen of my phone these last days when noticing there were new chapters. They felt like Christmas presents, and the good ones like a cashmere sweater or cashmere socks. Thank you very much!! I see that there are many Snape fans out here, I am too but I also love Hermione and I enjoy that you didn,t make her fall for him right away. 

PS. IrishChic20 review made me laugh. Draco fans I don,t understand you, he,s a bad person!!!! Sorry if there are any grammar mistakes, I,m spanish and I haven,t written in English in years I think. Happy New Year! 

person Kvarta
schedule December 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'm finally catching up with you, Yesss!!! :D

thank goodness I learned from the master, OracleObscured - I love her works, I've read them even before I stumbled at your first story. But at the time I wasn't big on leaving reviews, that started with your Debauchery

send me a cookie and I’ll forgive you  - we have a deal ;)

I never expect reviews so don’t feel obliged - I know, but I am fond of our little chats through comments ;)

Ok, my eloquence deserted me after this chapter, all I can think is: fck, fck, fck!!!
Her "nobility" (even if I understand where is it coming from) is really going to kill him.

So far you did not write lemons, please don't start now, or at least warn me :'(

OracleObscured already said all I was thinking so no need to repeat it, but...even if they do manage to keep their heads on the shoulders...whatever happens there can do irreparable damage in more ways than one.

I wish you and your family a HAPPY NEW YEAR and all the best :*

Looking forward new chapter, and more of your fantastic stories, in the net year XX  

person Anonymous
schedule December 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

You are taking it up a level!! 

Sincere thanks for your chapters AND the speed at which you're updating - such a gift to all us readers who are constantly waiting to get the goods on what happens next!! 

Well done! 

person Serine
schedule December 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

That was a bit intense when Draco and Snape were talking. 

schedule December 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Really enjoying this story. I just sometimes wish Hermione would remember that she's not just a witch. Couldn't she and Snape show up with some hand grenades? Most of the Death Eaters AND Baldyfart will be there. She could blow them up and apparate out with Snape. Or Snape could go there in advance  (since he knows the location) and rig up some semtex to a detonator. Old Voldy might not be completely dead but it's harder to terrorize people when you don't actually have a body. Then Hermione and Snape can ride off into the sunset. Just a suggestion....

schedule December 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Baaaaaaaaah! So much wet fish slapping. It reeks of mackerel in here. WTF is she thinking? I mean it's all very noble but she bascally just RSVPed to a rape party. Holy fuck. And she's not going to tell Snape beforehand? Oh, he's going to react to that wonderfully. And what's she going to do, just show up at the weekly Mudblood Fuck and say "Surprise! Look who's tagging along with you tonight"? This is gonna be bad. No way will she be able to just go along with whatever they tell her to do. She better take something to make it through the night. (Or is this story going to be the wet fish slap to end all wet fish slaps? I know you have that in you.)

As always, I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chatper. :)