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by Alcoholic_Rootbeer

person Anonymous
schedule January 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Boring chapter, but I hope it gets better agaibn soon

person Anonymous
schedule January 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

"Caring about someone who only wants my best interests at heart, and visa versa."

It's 'vice versa', not 'visa versa'. I'm finding more and more mistakes as I continue to read your story. You also said 'till it reached the back', but 'till' means a cash register. I think you mean 'until', or if you want to shorten it: 'till. 

person Anonymous
schedule January 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

It really bugs me when the definition of insanity cliche is used by an author I like. Not only was Albert Einstein incorrect in his definition of insanity, some people still throw it around like it's common knowledge and a widely accepted definition. It's not. The Draco and Hermione in this story would know that. You should know that. 

person Alex
schedule January 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

It's get better and better.....

person Ice Empress
schedule January 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I adore this fabulous look into a dark and tainted Draco, who is infected with a curse; a Hermione who doesn't exactly flee from the darkness like she should, but instead rises to that challenge and tries to smother the darkness with her own corrupted light. I love the insightful viewpoints into Draco's mind. I do wish he would get a crack at Ronald though. I can't wait to see how Hermione keeps Draco's impulses under control considering he could easily kill her while they tryst. I can't wait for the next installment. 

person Alex
schedule December 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

One of my favourite fanfiction on this side. Can't wait Tom read more.... 

Happy new year!

person Rai
schedule December 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Your story is amazing! Can't wait too see what's next.

person Sean Wright
schedule December 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Now that was unexpected.

person MotekElm
schedule December 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM

It just keeps getting better. I love it

person MzPearlz
schedule December 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I'm cringing and jumping in happiness at the same time and it's freaking me out a little but please (dear god don't you dare stop writing this story) I'm sadly hooked to the weird murderery but deliciously scientific aspects of it. I'm still wondering what the hell is going on but I like that feeling! So! With all that said, keep it up!