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by Alcoholic_Rootbeer

person MotekElm
schedule February 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

It's soooooo good. I need more, more, more. 

person AKxx
schedule January 31, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win!! Hope to see an update soon, I'm looking forward to seeing how this evolves. 

AKxx

person Anonymous
schedule January 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

They made love? He fucked her doggy style........

person AKxx
schedule January 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I just read the last ... 10 chapters, I think. It got a little slow for a bit, but I can feel it picking up again. I was way off on my guess, but there's still some explaining to wait for, so I'm going to keep trying to figure it out! I think Hermione maybe asks to see how he does it and he shows her, but doesn't kill her... probably not though. Good luck in the awards (: I sent a vote your way. x

person SL
schedule January 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I look forward to the chapters that will reconcile the scene in chapter 1 (Hermione apparently tortured by Draco) to the storyline. I like its ambigiutiy, leaving us the reader guessing.

 

person SofiaCantata
schedule January 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I love this story! I check in all the time for updates. This is honestly something I have never seen before. I am beyond intrigued. The last few chapters seemed drawn out, but I trust your process. Good luck with the dramione awards. 

person anon
schedule January 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM
sorry about the box question. i just read a lot about different occult traditions and the jewish one about the dybbuk has always stood out to me. just like the one about golems. the twist on it being a book was pretty original. looking forward to learning who the dybbuk is. im leaning toward a certain female but i suspect that you will surprise me. keep up the good work.
person Anonymous
schedule January 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I've skipped the past few chapters and only read the last few lines. I feel like you're trying to delay the progress of the story. I really don't mean to offend you but it's a chore to read it now, so I wish you well and won't be returning to finish the fic. Good luck in the awards and with your other projects

person anon
schedule January 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM
just wondering if the box has come into play yet. or if i missed it somewhere. dybbuks usually have one. maybe hermione could explain where it is and how she found out about it.
person MotekElm
schedule January 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I love this story. Can't wait for more. Good luck with the Dramione awards