Really enjoyed your story, I do like Lumione, Snamione and Dramione pairings, unfortunately there aren't as many Lumione stories as the other two. Thank you for a great read, I have read all the chapters in one go. Love the portrayal of Narcissa, Draco, Harry, Ron, Ginny, Molly and Hermione's parents as well as the two main characters. You're a very good author. Keep them coming. Good Luck :)
Oh my, my. This is fantastic and brilliant. I hardly moved a muscle as I ran through the entire thing- and it took me well over an hour! The story is beautifully well-written. It was a little bit awkward, reading Hermione's name with Ron and Harry's, because her personality is so different with them and she's so much more mature here. I gloss over "school girl Hermione" when I read about her in the context of the Manor. There was a very smooth transition for her into adulthood. Everything seemed to fit seamlessly together, except for the part with Molly. Thinking back, it's astonishing how different the beginning of the story is, compared to the end. It was also a lot more sexually charged, but the content made the loss of smut absolutely worth it. It was an incredible read. I hope you have this backed up and accessible, as well as that the story never changes its name or leaves the site, because I definitely want to read it again!
love this fic, thanks so much!!!
I've been a silent follower of your stories for years now but I really think you need more coverage. Have you thought about using archive of their own. Probably the best up and coming site their is. I love your stories and feel you deserve more...
Lucius is just so delicious, I swear. Have you watched some of Jason Isaacs interviews recently on YouTube? He did one last year, and again a few months ago, and a fan commented on his sexiness, which he immediately denied, and I found hilarious. But then, most people don't see themselves as particularly sexy, huh? He's still hot. And Lucius here is just yummilious...
Actually a bit surprised by how well Narcissa is taking all of it. It'll be interesting to see how Draco takes all of it, whether or not he'll put up a fight.
OMG! Love chapter 6!!!! PLZ make it go faster im a eager reader with your book! Love it!!
The story (by Ch 5) has quite some potential - after Narcissa laying out her cards to Hermione, the dynamics between Hermione and the three Malfoys bound to be more interesting. Draco is not likely to accept refusal outright. Narcissa's stake is interesting too: is she grooming Hermione to be an open official mistress?
Very mature and well-developed characters! I'm impressed that you've been able to show Lucius and Narcissa as human (and therefore flawed, as are we all) and write them with such understanding.
Looking forward to reading more of this.
This is a cool story. different then what I had thought at first but none the less a wonderful approuch to the story.
I like how you didn't make Ron or Harry out to be the bad guy. In stuff like this, where the original SO is concerned, they are always buttholes. But this barely mentions them and instead focuses on the couple at hand.
Hot. Like seriously. So looking forward to what happens next