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by Alcoholic_Rootbeer

schedule September 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

That was heartbreaking, beautiful, and ended with hope. Throughout it all I felt the pain and love. I know it wasn't for me, but I do thank you! HG4eva

person Victoria
schedule September 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This is so well-written that I actually felt the pangs of longing and angst right along with both Hermione and Draco. You are gifted at describing the agony of a breakup and kept up the heart-wrenching description of pain and loneliness so well all the way through to the end. Then their rapprochement at the planetarium came and it was over so quickly! I think I wanted more sweetness at the end to balance out all the heartache. ;)